great job! i cant wait to read the rest of your stories! you are an amazing author!!!!one of my favs!

ohh yeah!! serves her right to!!! i hate cho chang!!!
love the end jus wished that u deepend on more boys being interested with hermione and harry getting more jealous.

I just found this, and while it was enjoyable, I did have a few problems. First, if the trio are in there last year, why is Cho there? Also, I didnt get the reference to the Triwizzard. In this stories timeline, it was 3 years prior.

This started out very well. Harry, blinded by Cho, becomes a prat to his best friends. That was good. Good angst. Hermione tries to tell him about cho, Harry freaks out. Ok... I'm there. What changed Harry's mind? First, he pretty much tells Hermione that she's lying because she doesnt like Cho, then, next scene, he's smashing his lips to hers, and he's all angry at Cho. Did he ever really appologize to Ron for being a neglegent friend?

It was a good story that could have been better. I think there should have been a little more effort that Harry would have to make, to make it up to his friends. I also dont see a 17 year old boy (who's a virgin) being totally nakid with a nakid girl, then being like "ok, later!".

sorry this was so long. the short version: It started off quite well, but finished with a wimper.

ok...crappy story alert!!! *bling bling bling bling* (mechanical voice) *do not go near this story do not go near this story do not go near this story do not go near this story because it SUCKS!!!!* you are the worst writer i have read in AGES, and i read fanfiction ALOT. give it up....no one likes the way you write. why dont u just put us out of our misery and stop writing? you give us other fanfiction-ers a VERY bad name. get it? got it? GOOD!!!!

LOL classic! cho did get what was coming to her lol. i wanted to throttle her and harry in the beginning and even more so to cho when hermione found out about the plan! evil evil girl. and of course harry would be ignorant of the minor detail lol. but awesome story! loved it! fantastic job!

I think that was a very good story and NO I DONT THINK SHE GOT HUMILIATED ENOUGH.

she definetly got humiliated...not enough though..haha, I know I'm bad!Anyway, I love how they go nah, we already know that, at the end..that was very cute!

Oh, I liked the ending! HAHA! Er, well..it was a really good capter and I like how harry didnt let go of her when ...well..that part..okay so I love it! too bad the next chapters the last..

interesting plan, and it worked. i would never have the courage to do such a thing!!!!

great story! write more!
- mandi

that was suprising! i would have never guessed that harry would just ---- smash his lips to hers. thats like, cheating on cho! not that i care of coarse! i mean shes cheating on him! and harry was pissing me off at the begining of the chapter. lets just hope that he stays good!

-mandi

ps- i know he will

eiww harry is such a retard. he is such a pain and liar cheater, not caring about his best friend! not listening to her! i hate him! i hate him!

-mandi

Eiwwww
Cho has such an A t t i t u d e problem. i hate her. how dare she treats hermione that way. i could kill her!

-mandi

i like how harry was a little concernerd there. i just hope he stays concerned int he future. u know?

-mandi

heyy-
cho is being so pushy pushy pushy! she is so maen so far! i could tell she is a little fake! hermione is so much better than her! and much prettier in my opionon!
-mandi

i hate cho chang! she maves me very angry! its a good plot so far! and i could tell hermione is a little jelous!
-mandi