this story was
you could have waited to make harry and hermione a couple though..........

that story was the worst i had ever read in my life you cant even spell properly and your tense and past tense r all wrong
eg harry MEETS up with then and they all WENT

Great Story! Can't stop reading! Keep up the good job!

Wow I never tought i would fell sorry for Draco; great story you are writting here! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

I luuuurve this story, this is about my 6th time reading it. Good writing!

Great story love the wizard of oz line and you may be right about snape and harry they might be kin. keep up the great work

*screams* I LOVED THAT! I was sad though that Snape died...I was really starting to like him. I really like your style of writing, however I might suggest paying closer attention to your tenses. There were a few times where I had to go back and re-read a section because the tenses were a little mixed up. In any case, nice story
~TheMuse

please get a beta checker or sth....uv made quite a few grammatical mistakes...watch out about mixing present and past tense together

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One of the best stories I've read in some time.

Sweet, and suspensful. Joyful and Sad.

Great stuff, thank you for writing it.

This is going on my Favs.

Cheers!

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wonderfulk

That was a wonderful story... Thanks so much for completing it... cant' wait to read more stories...

*HUGS*

Muirnin

cool fic i love it cause its H/Hr and D/G yay to bad it asen't got R/LL in it. oh well i am enjoying reading this fic. Laters