This was an awesome story! I really enjoyed reading it and i hope you right more stories because you are a great writer. I love h/h stories and this was just....very very good! i give lol. i particularly liked how you made it a little cheesy/fluffy but you did not go over the top. i wish you luck if you write more stories.

I think this is the best little story I've read by far I think u should make another one for sake because this was really good. Or make a big story like more than twenty chapter's, so for your first fanfic this was great and brilliant

ur writing could use sum more wrok. instead of using words like goon and stuff but over all i luved the fluffines. soo cuute..

I don't mean to sound rude or anything but this story really wasn't all that great! I mean, the plot was ok, but it was completely american. There was no sense of culture that might suggest they wre in England or Europe...

More?
Bumpies?
Yeah?
Okay! BUMPIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Tasha
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That was a great first ficcy... you did a wonderful job with it...

I hope that you write a lot more stories... you have a great talent...

When you used Kawaii as the password I automatically thought of the Island of Kawaii... I had no idea that it was Japanese for cute... thanks for the education!

As Always,

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the story was cute!! absolutly, positively....cute... i loved it.i liked that draco wasin it... it got me to laugh... and the best part about it was how their friends where in on it... when one of the boys got kicked it the chin ~~~ i laughed..hahaha...write another one!!!!!

Question? Why did mcgonangall give malfoy 10 points for?
Other than that...very cute!

That was great! I love Hermione and Harry's conversation written of you.
Password is kawaii.
(In my opinion, It is better for there to be a noun after that,
since 1 was an adjective as Japanese.)
anyway, You are great author!
Hoping to see next story.
Thank you for writing!