hey i thought chapter was really good but it was kind of sad with ron not becoming captin but i think that harry being captin instead of ron is agood thing.

i think ur a great writer just keep doin wat ur doin an you'll be fine

Thank you for this story.That was great keep up the great work and enjoy your self.Please ignore any and all flames and have fun when you write.

This is a great story so far please keep mup the great work and thank you for the time and effort that it took to write this story so far.

this story is really good. i wonder what will happen at the meeting? i hope you update really soon.

think this is a pretty good story, keep up the good work and update soon

This is wonderful, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work and get those updates out.

Oh my god - this is incredible! I love all of your different plotlines, and the characters are excellent - Grawp was wonderful!

My only advice is to get a beta...or read through your fic carefully to make sure that you stay in one tense and pov. Like, most of the time you stay in past tense, and write "blah blah blah," He said. A few times you switch to present tense and instead of He said, you write he says. Just a bit of constructive critiscism. Hope you don't mind! I look forwards to seeing the next chapter!

This is a good story and i like it very much.The characters are well written and the plot is intresting.I realy hope that you will post the next chapter soon and seeing the last update date i can only hope that it will be soon enaugh.

Wonderful story!!! Keep updating!!! it!!!
Bye!!!

P.S: H/Hr 4 ever!!!!!!
WE LUV HARRY. WE LUV HERMIONE. WE LUV HARRY WITH HERMIONE!!!

i love what you write and i encourge you to write more.

it is all ok lol. but this is an awesome chapter can you please hurry with the next.

Hey I am a new fan of your work and I really love your writing! it is very good! you are very talented! I cant wait to hear about what the order is doing. POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON! POST SOON!

Finally! I'm glad for the H/Hr ooshiness. And of course I'm glad that Ron got over being mad at Hermione. But, I wonder how he's goign to react to them being together. Although, I guess it's not really official at the moment, right? I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next!

I hope that the ring doesn't have any bad enchantments on it or anything. After all, the shop disappeared right after he walked out of it, and he had never seen it before. Poor Cho. She keeps trying, but Harry keeps shutting her down, unintentionally, but still. I hope that he tells her soon so that she doesn't get hurt again. Yay H/Hr!