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Great story ! I loved the littly Myrlte deal! Awesome! |
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MercyMeSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 03/02/04
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demskyrSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/12/03
Absolutely brilliant!
Funny, Charming, Witty, Romantic, Action-Packed.
Everything a growing boy needs.
This is going on my Favs list right now.
Thanks for the ride.
Cheers! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 05/10/03
ah, excellent ending! i think a sequel would be good! just to tie up the loose ends with ron and gwendolyn and harry's date! please? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/10/03
good chapter! i like the harry/snape scene, that was really excellent. it was rather amusing seeing hermione tease harry like that in his bed. and i like you're little a/n at the end there. |
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kiraSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 22/09/03
I loved this fic. It was funny and sweet at the same time. I loved Gwen's punishment. It was very amusing. But I kinda feel bad for Ron since he doesn't know that she is going liking him now because she is forced to....But I guess everyone will get what they want in the end.... |
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gasperskSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/09/03
This was good. Good to the point where I give you great credit for coming up with a very original plot. You've done a great job of keeping all characters in their proper mind sets, and I even like how you put a Wizard Debt into the mix with Lucius and Harry. Bravo on that. I never did review the first part of this story, about the snow storm, but you made a seamless transition without having to go gratuitous (Althought that's not all that bad in some regard either.) I hope to read more, because I really like this story arc you have come up with. Great job, and keep up the good work.
GSK  (PS, not a smiley kinda person, but this would be appropriate. |
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gasperskSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/09/03
Now this one impresses me as well. I'm not a huge fan of AU Year 5 fics in some cases, but this has really got an intriguing storyline. Keep this up. Even with Sirius as a Deus Ex Machina with the explanation, I still believe it's a solid mystery. Well plotted mystery at that, because right now, I wonder if it isn't Lucius who has some sort of hideous designs on Hermione, with his Slytherin Nation type feelings and desires. Good thing Voldemort ain't involved.
Keep up the good work, I enjoy fics like this. No need to rush the writing, but you have a good amount on the word count, and the size is almost perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Kudos again,
GSK |
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Duh, Duh, Duh! And Malfoy strikes. So, waht is it with Harry and prophecies?
Cass |
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Aww. All this over a manipulative painting...scary. I like the way this is developing and the Doctor Who mention was excellent. I can see our kiddies watching that... |
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Nice little bit about Moaning Myrtle. Nice to see that she got a little lovin' before the end. Interesting turn with Gwendolynn as well. Very good, looking for more.
Cass |
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I like Harry's theory. If I were him, I'd test it every chance I got with Hermione just to be safe. |
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I like this one. Ron in love with a painting. Wonderful! So, when do we get more?? Soon, right? And then some sweet, sweet H/Hr lovin's. Right?
Cass |
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