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Little White Lies

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chelley83
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/07
very cute and sweet...i'm glad it all worked out for them in the end
 

BiggyM
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/06
Hey, great story and all, but Im sorta confused about something, and by reading other reviews, it seems Im the only one who caught it.

You said that at the dance, Hermione has sex with Ron (EEEWWW HGISDFHG IDSTHGILS) mhm, yes anyways, after having sex she gets pregnant. But in the new future, Hermione had sex with Harry.

So why didnt she get pregnant with HARRY'S child this go around?
 

ladylaughalot
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/07/06
I love it! Really really great and it's going on my growing list of favouries... I'm also going to read some of your other stories.
 

MichelleRadcliffe
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/04/06
*claps* That was fantastic!!! You might wonder why you're getting reviews for such an old story... But all the new ones suck so I went to the end of the list and working backwards.

Still, fantastic - original because I've never read a story like this. Anyways, great job -I hope you're still writing!

 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/05
story was good i think, ummm but mayb i read to fast but im a little confused as to wot actually happened, oh well, i mite re-read it some day.
 

HarryandHermione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/05/05
I just reread it, after comepletely forgetting about it, and let me tell you, It's just as good the second time!
 

Silver Dragon
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/12/04
That was good and I'm very happy with how it ended. Only thing that bothered me was Hermione giving into hormones with Ron... I just can't, for the life of me, see that happening. Great fic!
 

hpfanmelissa
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/02/04
This was a great little ficlet! I think it could have been extended into more chapters though, if you'd gone into detail and all that....

Good job!
 

gal-texter
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/03
Hi, this was recommended here:
http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=5015

Happy new year!
 

jetso
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/11/03
I haven't actually read that many time-travelling stories; but among all the bits and pieces I've read, this is unique. Startlingly original and fresh. I love the play on the idea of a little white lie to oneself and that of time-travelling and changing the past.

It shows how love is selfish and rightly selfished. Justified. Its beautiful in its frankness of human nature and of love. A jaded Hermione is slightly foreign, but familiar in her ways, almost brutal in her reasoning. The encounter between her past and present is wonderfully done, suitably surreal and eerie.

The problem of a Time Paradox faultlessly sidestepped. Seamless in the way it fits together all the different times together. Touching in its portrayl of Hermione's desperation. Sprinkled with angst, yet not overdone. Beautiful.

A wonderful ending, beautiful. Thought-provoking in its question: what's the harm in a little white lie.
 

Naveah
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/03
That was to cute! to cute I can't say it enough!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/09/03
 

perenelle
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/03
aww... this is just sooo cute... it kinda makes the reader feel relieved in one way or the other as the story ends.. like being able to feel what hermione might felt too.. great fic!
 

Cutie Blossom
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/03
DARN STRAIGHT! What's the harm in a "little white lie"? VERY GOOD! ^_^ Loved it! Hermione is so naughty! At least things came through in the end! ^_^ I'm adding this to my fav list! ^_^ Tres bien!
 

Ezmerelda
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/03
Great ficlet! You had us wondering, for a while, what kind of horrible consequences she'd brought upon herself and the world, only to reveal that her "little white lie" had worked and actually improved the time line.

Thanks for writing!
 

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