Oh! It wasn't another chapter! I feel kind of cheated. I would SO love it if you'd expand on this to give us even a short chaptered piece. I'd love to see this story the way you see it. It has the potential to be heartbreaking and gorgeous and so many other things. If you ever decide to write it, let me know, please?

I feel like this is the epilogue to something long and detailed --

And I look down and see the 'next' link.

hey,

Absolutely great stuff, might have more to it than meets the eye. Could do you good to expand the horizon. I especially like the dark arts part of brinnging potter and sirius back. Well would you kill me if i copied tat? *copied the thing where he used dark arts to bring them back beyond the viel*

Au revoir, damn my head hurts

Ooohh, very interesting! I love the idea of Hermione editing "Hogwarts, a History"!! Perfect idea, really... :-)
Nice allusion to Henry V. Very clever. :-)

Fascinating. Intriguing. You have piqued the interest of this Southern girl. Am looking forward to more.

Oh my goodness. I adore your writing! You are such a wonderful, eloquent writer. The words you write flow through my mind as if I'm reading an ancient text from early American times. That letter by a soldier fit perfectly into this letter, the sound of the words fitting deliciously with the rest of the story. I loved the part you fit in about the veil, and I do believe that something of the sort may happen in actual canon. I can hope.

Thank you for making me smile.

Auf Wiedersehen

Hallie

This was a wonderful story. I have to say that this was one of the most interesting stories I have read. How you used something as trival as Hogwarts A History to be a key point in your story, is brilliant. I would never had thought to use that book as a basis for story. I loved that you used as inspiration.*Yes, I read the bottom note...though alittle hard to see*
I hope you continue to write stories of this creative level. You have a great talent and I hope to see more of it.

This is very good, I like it. Get some more fics posted up soon!

Very good but also somewhat confusing - Dudley was the one that wrote this, right? The letter there was quite flowery - I doubt that Harry would have used so much 'thee's and 'thou's and such writing. An effect of history, I suppose. Then again, now that I've actually understood the small additional A/N (Portkey made it real tiny...) that does explain it. As well, what exactly did happen to send Harry into that veil?

Hope to see that longer, lighter piece sometime soon

That was beautifully different! Never read anything like it! Though it was very sad, it was amazingly written. You have a great talent. Thanks so much for sharing with us. I wouldn't be surprised if there were a real "Hogwarts: A History" out there containing pieces like this (though I'm hoping for a win against Voldemort). Keep writing!

That was really confusing, but what I did understand I liked.

This is certainly a uniqe piece of fanfiction. Yet it's very very very very good! I applaud the way you write this fic. It's very original and it seemed as if i'm back in my history class but this time i'm not asleep and actually paying attention! Lolz.... well i'll pay attention if my boring teacher would ever discussed Hogwarts: A History in class! Wouldn't that be grand?!

for some reason this was sad to me. But good you know?

I'm reading this for the third time now and all I can say is: BRILLIANT