NOOOOOOO !$&*^()(*^%^^^%$$$$%*(__*^%##%^&**&^%%^^&*(* LUCIOUSE should die just die a slow and painful death !@#$%*(&^#%#@#@@!!!E#^%#R#@*(@*#^%^%#^*(#(*!!!!

i don't know if u still read these reviews,but got to tell u this story was very good till last chp.sorry,i know plot & all,but that last scene was rather idiotic.they were attacked here twice,lost ron here,somebody stalked them before they made love-& they just ignored it & hr went out with no protection?downright idiocity,if u ask me.even i would not have been so careless,& they r veteran fighters.u could have wrote something a little more realistic,like hr's reaction to breakup.

I've been really bored of the last couple of days, so I decided to go back through and reread all of my all-time favorite stories and this is definitely one of them. I loved it again even though I had already read it. Really great work,I enjoyed the plot and all the events. The characters were great and everything! Wonderful job and I look forward to reading more of your stories!

I've been really bored of the last couple of days, so I decided to go back through and reread all of my all-time favorite stories and this is definitely one of them. I loved it again even though I had already read it. Really great work,I enjoyed the plot and all the events. The characters were great and everything! Wonderful job and I look forward to reading more of your stories!

i read this whole story in one day and it was one of the few storys that made me cry
when Ron died i sobbed my eyes out. But this story was so awesome!!!!!! I loved it so much and i cant wait to read the seguel!!! AWESOMO!!!

that was really good hope you make a sequal!!! can't wait to see what u write next!!!

great story... i so happy... i cried and i laughed... the death of ron was really sad but in the end everything was alright and that's what made me happy...

candice

Good story, liked it. Look forward to the sequel.

A couple of points not mentioned, does Harry have a curse scar on his back now due to the killing curse hitting him there? Will Hermione find it on their wedding night?

Voldemort's wand, where is it? It is a "brother" wand to Harry's though only a few of the Death Eaters saw that effect occur. Did a death eater take it from Voldemort's body or is it now in the possession of the aurors. It may be the needed "key" to activate the death mark's on a death eater's arm.

My tip for head death eater now is Lucius Malfoy, I always think he follows Voldemort until the opportunity arises for Lucius to take over. Voldemort's obession with Harry would have annoyed Lucius no end.

Hi, Sarah! People were looking for this fic here:
http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=4636

You're welcome to say anything there, or in the Wonky threads (now on #13)!

~Pen

fantastic fic. It could stand a teensy bit of proofreading, but just for minor things like misspellings; the story is great! I think you really expanded upon the characters that JK wrote as opposed to just making what you want of them, which is a rare talent in fanfic authors I've seen. (granted, I haven't seen many, so take that with a grain of salt)

It really kept me engaged and wanting to hear more... still do, in fact.

This was a great story! I really enjoyed it! the writing was thorough, consistent, and damn good entertainment! HAHA! Great work!

"DON'T YOU DARE. I HAVE A RIGHT TO KNOW!" She'd jumped to her feet and stood between one of the armchairs and the couch. "I miss him too, Harry. I was there too! Don't shut me out. You aren't protecting me. DON'T SHUT ME OUT!"

This section was great....it showed real emotion and demonstarted the way to two of them are feeling. I also like the way that Hermione is trying to hint she has feelings for Harry

Mr Weasley's reaction seems sincere. I like the comment that Ginny seems like a sister. I aslo think that there's enough evidence in cannon that if a student was killed in circumstances like that that Snape would give them no homework!!

so sad but well written. Gives the reader a desire to want to read on and discover more...

This was a great story! I'll be starting on the sequel now!!