missmonetUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
oh please tell that harry dose not uses hermione to get what he wants. i hope that hermione sees his "game" and teaches him different. i want more of your story. |
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MayaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
Wow...at first I didn t know what to expect when you said ..Harry was very arrogant and full of himself. But I have to tell you that your story rocks!!
There is something about it that just draws you in. You have to update soon because this might be the best plot I have read all year.
Props on that!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
It\'s great!!! Keep it coming. It\'s got great potential!!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter. |
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What a promising little chapter!!! Loved the beginning. I was a little taken aback when you said Harry was out of character, ladies man and etc, but it wasn´t exaggerated till now like I see around here many times. And I liked that.
Hope you post the next chapter soon!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks  Yes, I just figured people should know that he will definately be different, what with having grown up differently - then no one could have a go at me for having an ooc Harry. Glad you like it |
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bvc17Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
love it already! i absolutely adore the interactions between harry/draco and harry/james/sirius its just how i imagined them to act when harry got older. |
Author Feedback: Thanks  Me too, I liove Harry and Draco as friends, because it just seems so wrong, and yet so right at the same time xD |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
Harry and Draco best friends....WOW!! I love that Lily and the Mauraders are still alive, but the ooc Harry is strange. I am looking forward to reading more!! Really good start!! |
Author Feedback: Yeah  I'd like to think that cannon Harry will come out a bit more as the story progresses, even if it is just a little bit |
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BrizoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
I liked the rough begining dispite the abrupt scenes. I think perhaps Harry's reaction of Hermione was a bit..'iffy'? I mean he has been a playboy for 4 years and to think Hermione was a great girl after one date was a bit too...much of a change in character. But otherwise a great begining.
Update soon
/:/Brizo/:/ |
Author Feedback: Thanks  That's something that will be explained in the next chapter, there is a reason why he likes her so much. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
Hey this story caught my attention and I'm glad i read it. sounds interesting so far, I always find it cool to get stories where James and Lily are alive. Can't wait for more. |
Author Feedback: Thanks  Me too, I love them so much that I had to write something with them in it, even if they weren't the main focous! |
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gravacorSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
This was a good start to the story. Harry seems to be very easy (sexually active) I'm not sure about that. He definitely needs Hermione to help settle him down. I'm not sure that she would have kissed Harry back as easilly as she did, but we'll see how she goes from there. I did like Harry's reaction to the date in that he acknowledges that she isn't like his typical girlfriend but that he likes it and he recognizes her intelligence. How much angst are we going to have in this story? |
Author Feedback: Thanks  Yes, he does, though that's not really going to be what the stories about to start with. And the fact that she was so eager to kiss him back is sort of exokained in the next chapter.
Not very much. Maybe a little in the odd couple chapers but it's with good reason and doesn't take up the entire story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
love the characters new identity. Please continue writing, i would really enjoy reading it. Update. |
Author Feedback: Thank you  I'll be updating sometime this week, hopefully. |
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LittleV25Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/11/09
i think that your story is really cute. you are doing a really great job so far if this a your first harry/hermione story. keep it up. |
Author Feedback: Thanks  -Sigh of relief- hopefully I can keep the standard up! |
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I love it!  It's a very good story so far, and I didn't even realize that it was unbetaed until I read your note at the end! Can't wait to read the rest! |
Author Feedback: Thanks  Good, I checked it over quickly myself and just had to hope that there wasn't any major problems! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/11/09
Interested to see where this all goes. I'll definintely keep reading. Good job!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, thats good to know |
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ScoutSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/11/09
Congratulations!
A great start to what sounds like will be a great story!
I'm looking forward to the next update.
scout |
Author Feedback: Thanks |
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