I like the idea of Hermione having been appointed as Teddy's godmother. It suggests that Tonks and Lupin saw that Harry and Hermione would be a couple, and approved. Of course, in the canon Remus doesn't say a thing about the godmother of his child when he asks Harry to be the godfather at Shell Cottage, and Hermione was right there. But it's still a nice and neat idea.

The affirmations of love and when they had their personal epiphanies was satisfying. I particularly liked Harry's realisation dawning "one night while I was sitting there with you in the hospital wing while you were petrified". Nice.

> ... give my Dad enough time to recover from me showing up with a boyfriend and an infant ...

HA HA HA!!! Good one!

Very nice, not bad. Now I'm off to see the rest you have written

This was a really nice story, and I loved your take on Hermione. I really do think that if Harry disappeared, she'd go looking and wouldn't stop till she found him...and she'd get some sense into him one way or another.

I wonder what Hermione will do to dear Vernon? *evil anticipatory smile*

And having Luna be the one who was able to talk Hermione down was a very nice touch. Luna's got a lot of wisdom behind that flaky exterior.

Ooh, I like this rewrite! Putting the beginning in present tense makes the beginning very intersting - it has a different feel than having it written in the usual omniscient third person. I also liked all the detail you added in about Gringotts and Hermione's authority to sign for Harry, his leaving her control of his fortune, etc. It fills in a few holes. I've always loved this story, though, and I'm glad other people can enjoy it now that it's on here.

The story was cute. I liked it. Update another story soon!!

I'm glad your Hermione and Ron have the sense to realize that constantly arguing doesn't make a perfect couple! I like the St Catherine bit, adorable! Oh my goodness, they've had quite a time trying to find him. I love the bit about Lavender. I love your Hermione's humor! Just a perfect capture of her.

A very sweet story.

It's a nice plot idea and I like how it showcases Hermione's ever-logical thought processes. It also feels very in-character for Harry to bolt as his survivors' guilt takes hold.

It fussed with my reading a bit that you jumped back and forth from present to past tense narration.

I also felt that a bit too much was crammed into what was meant to be a short fic; if you really wanted to cross every t and dot every i, it might have worked better to spread the revelations out over a few scenes or chapters rather than one conversation.

I thought the characterization for the Marauder generation was brilliant, helping in creating some of the humor that balanced the angst. I enjoyed reading it.

I just found this story on the Rec Engine and it's one of the best Oneshots I've ever read. It was very touching and Harry and Hermione are perfectly in character. That's really an "all is good" ending for the Harry Potter series.

The deepest and most touching short fic I have read. You just have to love the Harry and especially the Hermione you have portrayed here. Awesome!! and please keep writing!!

Awwww...so cute. Thanks for this. I didn't get to celebrate Hallowe'en at all this year (been sick after a surgery) so this really just about makes up for it.

I wish you had written the end of DH. I like your version far better

H&H4EVA
Hermione Rae

Aw, that was really lovely. Most definitely a treat--thank you for sharing it.

Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

Wow that was a wonderful short story for today.
I will on my way to the other story's to read.
you are doing a real good job at them all.
but till then have a real good week and weekend.
Looney Warner Mouse" Good night and good luck"
Harry" Good night Muggles!"
Hermione " Good night all"
Ron" So long for now Muggles!"
Luna" Tha tha that's all Muggles!"
Hamton " Tha tha tha that's all Folks!"
fade out to black.
The end.

For me, it started out good. Then it got typical. Then it just got tedious. I stopped reading when Hermione started talking about the bank.