AshUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 18/11/09
Well, that explains why Ginny was being so horrible to Hermione. She was trying to hurt Harry and what better way than to do it by hurting Hermione? I never would have thought that plot line up, how very original of you.  I wonder when Mr Malfoy is going to make his grand entrance into the rest of the story? Looking forward to your next installment!!!! |
Author Feedback: Very soon, I'm sure...LOL! Glad you liked it, and not many saw that coming!
Anyway, thank you for reviewing- I'm working on Ch 13 as we speak- and it's taking FOREVER. lol I want to do my readers proud! Apparently you lot are expecting something quite spectacular (nervous eyes)
Thanks again, and I'll have it up shortly!  |
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Wonderful!!! I love this. The venom in Draco's dialog is delicious. Very well done! |
Author Feedback: THANKS!! I LOVED writing Draco- I've never done him before (don't take that the wrong way...  ) and it was so fun to be a little evil...LOL! Glad you liked him, he might have a few more things to say later on in the fic...
Thanks again for the review!! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 16/11/09
Oh I have sorta forgotten about Hermione's wand. Well this does explain them. I still actually like them. It's quite a little plot twist. I have to say, with that little plot twise, I am enjoying the story much better. It started off a little iffy, but it has definitely improved. I am glad that you have taken everybody's reviews into consideration. I love how twisted Ginny is. She must really love Draco.
I cannot wait to see more of this unfold. Unfortunately, I cannot see anymore of this yet, b/c you haven't updated. It's all good. I know how busy life gets. lol.I haven't read a fic like this (all in one go) in a really long time. So this was fun for me. Thanks for the nice little break.
Good luck w/ RL, I know how much it gets in the way,
michelle (aka usha88). |
Author Feedback: wow Wow WOW!! Thanks for all the reviews (that's what I like to see!)
Glad you're enjoying the story and that I've got another D/G fan out there! I'm not really much of one myself, but there have been a few complaints...nothing nasty but H/Hr fans don't like a lot distractions when it comes to romance LOL!! I'm so glad you're liking the story, better than before anyway, and I'll be updating later this week. Probably tomorrow and DEF by the weekend. Thanks again for the magnificent reviews, they're ace!!
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 16/11/09
I can see where you are going. I am sorry to hear that people are very picky about the way the characters are. I believe that people have their own perceptions about the how the characters are and have read many fics on here that stay in that same type of....let's say characterization. At first, I was a little miffed by the way Hermioen and Harry played out, but can see that this is your own take on it.
I am glad that you are taking constructive criticism though. That's the best thing that you can do.
As for D/G. I absolutely loved this part and love D/G fics. Very very great explanation of them. And, I'm glad you're not turning it into a smut story (as much as I like those), this doesn't seem fitting for it.
Keep up the good writing and i'm off to read more chapters. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 16/11/09
Yay! i loved it. I am so glad. Of course that is what is suppose to happen. Ginny and Draco together. I don't really care about how Harry and hermioen feel because I know that in the end they will get together. And plus, they seem just fine. Plus, Ginny is crazy in this one, wow....quite a bonch of words to be used towards hermione. Pulled out the c-word. Of course depending on where you're from that word doesn't mean quite so much as it does here in America. lol. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 16/11/09
Well thank god I don't have to wait. I would be very very angry to have to wait for this. I wonder if it is Ginny, Ron or some teacher. Lovely job on this chapter. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 16/11/09
Hmmm...well I do have questions and concerns about what is going on between the two. I am very interested in seeing what Ginny is doing. Hopefully she is off snogging Draco. That woudl be wonderful. I cannot wait to see what happens. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 16/11/09
Well it seems as if Hermione has lost her cool for a bit. Anybody would in that situation. Wonderful job on this. I am sure that this will be harry that she runs into... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 16/11/09
Well, this was an interesting chapter. It is very interesting. Seems to me as if Ron is doing something with Luna, but I am not too entirely sure. Great job on this so far. It's an interesting start for your first chaptered fic. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 16/11/09
I liked it. It wasn't too bad. I expected it to happen. Wonderful jab at Hermione's and Ron's relationship in the book. I'm off to read more... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/11/09
Well, obviously it is Harry. Very interesting. I am wondering where this is happening. Lovely use of description. I can tell that is your forte. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/11/09
I'm not too entirely sure how I like this Hermione. It doesn't seem to me that she would do something to get Harry jealous or get him to notice her. Of course, I suppose if you're staying canon to the Hermione in the sixth book, then she would, considering she did charm that one guy for Ron. So, I suppose this is canon. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/11/09
Oh yes. I completely forgotten about the kiss. I haven't read the books in ages. At least the last two books. Well this seems very interested. I see that you have a lot of chapters out, so I'm off to read them. Thankfully a night where I can just do this instead of college homework. Yay for a little baby break. |
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hahahaha, so, he's using her? hahahaha stupid fool... well, if he didn't fall for her... hum... ok, wnat to see how does Ronikins know about that! |
Author Feedback: Yeah, he's not gonna be too pleased...LOL!! Ginny is quite a duffer, thanks for reviewing and hope you enjoy the rest!! |
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Hey, love the story so far, especially this new twist. Update quickly please! Thanks |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Glad to see you're enjoying it!! I'll get the next chapter up within the next few days, I promise! Thank you for reviewing, hope you like the rest |
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