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Hermione's Mis-Fortune

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Blue Lady
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/11/09
Loved the fic, especially Hermione's inner rant but my favorite part was definitely finding out Harry had asked about ALL of their fortunes!
Author Feedback: Haha, yeah he's a curious little bugger! Glad you liked it, thanks for the review!!
 

Soch
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/10/09
That was fun.
Thank you for sharing!
Keep up the good work.
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it- thanks for your review!
 

FEAR
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/10/09
"“Joo ved on opeening day uff the Qvidditch seeson, both riding an antscheeant broomsteek. Joo hofer een the ottum air as the Cannons svirl around joo, just beefor joo fall off eend land on jor oreenge ceeke. Ronald’s seester is jor maid uff honor, who sveeps jor buttocks off vith a broom.

“Ronald eend jorself vill put off haffing children for seex jeers after jor marriage. Jor dotter, Rose, vill haff manee freckles eend foozy red hair, vile jor son, Hugo, ees dark- heeded vith peersing blue eyes, eend has a birthmark reseembling dirt on hees nose.”"

Ahahaha I was laughing so hard after reading the gypsy's words. Not to mention Hermione talking about her granny I absolutely loved this fic. Hope you write more like this
Author Feedback: Haha THANKS!! This is my favorite one shot than I've done- I didn't even know if anyone would be able to understand the gypsy- but I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you so much for reviewing, I'm tickled pink at your response

I plan on coming up with some more rant pieces- this one was pretty popular (thanks to reviewers!!) So thanks for encouraging me to write more. So glad you enjoyed it.

lilymione1203
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/09
"Deformed squirrel" and "lesbian and a hump-backed grave robber" - frickin hilarious! Love those Hermione rants.
Author Feedback: Me too!

Haha Glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing!!
 

Silver Dragon
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/09
LOL! That was too funny! And I have to agree on the names, Rose is nice and I can see it for Harry's daughter's name. But Albus Severus? I can't see him naming a son after Snape even if Snape used his pecker to plug a leak in a dam and save a town full of handicapped people and small babies. (Seriously scared me that that was what came to mind when I read Hermione's thoughts on the name in this fic.) I was expecting a bit of a blow up from Ron and Ginny, guess I've been reading too many fics lately where they're not nice. And at the end I can so see Ron spitting out bits of pumpkin pasty when he tries to whistle. Great fic!
Author Feedback: Thanks a bundle!! So glad you liked it

You could do well writing a Hermione rant fic yourself- there's NO WAY Harry would name his kid after Snape. Funny analogy, there!

I considered having Ginny's reaction be more severe, but I figured making her an airhead was punishment enough- and her hair looked bad at the end (which is a plus ).

Ron's taken a beating in a few of my earlier fics, so I figured I'd be nice this time and just have him stuff himself with food

Your review was very kind, thanks again for leaving it!!

lilymione1203
 

granger_danger
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/09
Absolutely brilliant. This made my night. I have been feeling ill today, and this made me chuckle right out loud. I love reading your Hermione rants, because it gives such an insight into the part of her personality that we KNOW is there. Great job!
Author Feedback: Thanks!!!

This is my favorite rant piece that I've done- it gets a bit out of hand in bits I'll admit

I'm so glad it made you feel better, and thanks for the WONDERFUL feedback. I write for the readers' enjoyment, and you make it all worth it

lilymione1203
 

Mike
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/10/09
I liked this story, it was fun. I cracked up at the children's names. What was JKR thinking! Great job!
Author Feedback: I was wondering the exact same Thanks for reviewing- glad you liked it!!
 

sandtreader
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/10/09
That was brilliant. You had me laughing just about all the way through. Refreshingly different from many of the stories on here - good job!

I enjoy reading stories where Harry teases a very flustered Hermione. That seems to be exactly the kind of thing he would do with her. And your slightly under-the-radar 'jab' at the epilogue was very well done too. Thanks!
Author Feedback: WOW THANKS!!! That means a lot- I'm glad you liked it!!
 

terpsichorean
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/10/09
‘I marry Ron and become a mediocre pet groomer with extremely unattractive children that have the names of homeless ogres.’

Man, you almost made me spit water all over my computer keyboard.

Hilarious.
Author Feedback: Sorry about that, but it's a good thing- right? Glad you got a kick out of it, it was a blast to write! Thanks for reviewing
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/10/09
Her future sounded absolutely horrible! No offense Ron lol! The inner monologue was great. The conversation at the end was really nice as well. Loved this one shot!
Author Feedback: Thanks! The future did look bleak, didn't it? Thank you for reviewing!!
 

Looney Warner Mouse.
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/10/09
That was interesting to read.
and Now for your in-joy-ment for you all.
form you tube here is Alvin and the Chipmunks and the Brinny and the Chipettes a music number for Hermione called ( Single Girls ).
( The Squeakquel).
and now to end this comment.
Looney Warner Mouse" Good night and good luck!"
and now form Disney here is Mickey Mouse.
cue mickey on stage.
Mickey " lets have a big thanks to the Author Lilymione1203"
Minne Mouse " So long every one ha-ha"
And now Form Warner Bother Bugs Bunny and Porkey Pig with Daffy Duck with Harry Potter And Hermione with Ron and Luna.
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Bugs bunny" And that's the end!"
Daffy Duck" SO good bye"
Harry,Hermione and Ron with Luna " tha tha that's all Muggles!"
Porkey Pig " Tha tha that's all Folks!"
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and the Muppets too!
Kermit the Frog " We will see you all next time for the next wonderful story,but till then we will see you all next time on the Portkey.org show!"
now in the blacny.
Statler and Waldorf.
Waldorf" Just you think that this story is bad something wonderful happens"
Statler " How is that?"
Waldorf" It ends"
input Cartoon sound track and the Muppet show closing theme to end this.
fade out to black.
but Sirius Black come up to say some thing.
with James Potter too.
Sirius and James " So long Muggles!"
re fade out to black.
the end for real this time.


Author Feedback: Thank you, that was a long one! (and it still had my name ) I adore the chipmunks- used to watch that every day when I was little. Thanks for reviewing- I hope you don't agree with Statler and Waldorf!!

lilymione1203
 

kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/10/09
I thought the story was funny!!!Lol Especially the whole 'I don’t know how I’m going to raise a lesbian and a hump-backed grave robber. ' That was Hilarious!!!Great job on the story. I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Author Feedback: Thank you very much!! I don't know what else I may add to this in the future, it's one of the longest one-shots I've written... but I will have some other things coming out shortly I'm so glad you liked it (that's one of my favorite lines as well!) Thanks so much for reviewing!!!!

lilymione1203
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/10/09
"I’m doing my kids a favor by preventing their existence; I don’t know how I’m going to raise a lesbian and a hump-backed grave robber."

OMFG. THAT LINE WAS BRILLIANT.
Author Feedback: Thank you! hahaha I chuckled myself when I wrote that- glad you liked it
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/10/09
"My son will also look like he’s blind. ‘Piercing blue’ eyes? Does that mean they’re albino? What dame’s gonna want to tap that?"

LMAO!!!!!!

I shouldn't have tried to read this at work. I could barely keep from laughing out loud. Snarky!Hermione FTW!
Author Feedback: WOW! Thank you very much I'm glad you liked it- I'm sorry, but 'Hugo' just completely caught me off guard in the epilogue. I was floored when I saw it, and I put my reaction into Hermione's brain. Thanks for reading and reviewing, tickled pink you got a kick out of it

lilymione1203
 

MarauderMooney
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/10/09
Another fluffy and cute story. I liked it. I was hoping Harry would storm out of the tent or something, but I liked the playful banter between the two of them. Very good. Looking forward to the next, of course.
Author Feedback: Thanks for taking a look! I had considered having Harry's reaction be similar to Hermione's, but I thought I'd portray him in a bit more 'mischievous' light. Thank you for reviewing, glad you liked it

lilymione1203
 

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