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YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent. I always wondered what Hermione would have done if Harry had done something like this - of if there had been a prophecy tying Harry and Hermione together in this way. I know that Harry hates the prophecy that ties him to Riddle...but what if there had been one tying him to Hermione? Would he have embraced it? I can't imagine that he wouldn't have, but it would make a very interesting story.
I like your writing very much and I'm glad you wrote this story!
Regards,
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Author Feedback: Wow, thanks! Really glad you liked it 
That IS an interesting thread for a story, I may look into writing something like that (flits eyes about the room in a stealthy manner) LOL
Thanks again for reviewing!! I really appreciate it!
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Very good chapter and very funny. I ask for More please. |
Author Feedback: Awww, thank you dearly! Sadly, I'm afraid I won't be expanding this little ficlet of innocence. Someday, if I think of something just as cute to companion this, I MIGHT add to it- but as of now I'm letting it stand on its own. Thanks for your review, though, and I it when readers ask for more!  |
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TechnomadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/10/09
I loved Hermione's rant, and I thought that little stunt with Neville's picture was hilarious! I wonder what would have happened if she'd done that with pictures of Crabbe and Goyle, one for each roomie?
"CATFIGHT!!!" |
Author Feedback: Haha I didn't think of that! It would be quite funny to see! Thanks for the review, I'm really glad you got a kick out of it!! |
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That was rather cute. Though I was at least partially expecting Harry to tell her that he's going to drop Divination as well, can't say I've ever seen a fic where he does that during 3rd year. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing!! Glad you enjoyed |
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arlithilSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/09
I'm going to say a manly thing instead of "lovely" or something this time. EPIC! That was awesome! You project her inner monologues amazingly well, I just love reading it. And then the fluff? Superb! I'm adding this to my favorite story. What I'd do for a Hermione...
a sequel would be cool too =) |
Author Feedback: WOW thanks!!! I'm so glad you liked it, and "epic" is VERY masculine 
Thank you for reviewing!! I really appreciate it
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ArchieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/10/09
Haha, that was adorable!!! Would have been nice to see something like this in the books.
*~Archie~* |
Author Feedback: Thanks Archie!! Glad you enjoyed it  |
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hihihihi like it!!! well i like the way she said all those things about divination! lol and the the romance part too!!! so fluff!!! |
Author Feedback: Yes, Hermione is definitely not a fan of divination.  Thanks for reviewing, I'm ecstatic over your review!!!! |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/10/09
Very clever on Harry's part....good for Him...letting Hermione know how he feels...since she was never going to say anything....silly girl. Cute story!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it! |
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cute short story, it was sweet to the end.
I would like other people to read this story too.
you did a real good job with it.
But now it's time to end this Review with the help of the Muppets.
So here is Kermit the Frog.
Cue Kermit on stage.
Kermit" Well it's time to go but before we do lets have a big thank you to the Author of this story Lilymione1203 Yeah!"
Looney Warner Mouse " Good Morning and good after noon and good night and good luck!"
Kermit " We will see all next time for a new story but till then we will see all next time on the Portkey.org show yeah!"
and now in the blackeny with Snape are the two old Muppet men name Statler and Waldorf.
Statler" How they do it ?"
Waldorf" How do we read it ?"
Statler" Why do we read it ?"
Snape with them looks at every one that are read this story and ask .
" WHY do you read ?"
Looney " I nothing better to do that's why"
input Muppet show cloesing theme.
fade out to black.
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Author Feedback: Awww that was cute! my favorite yet And I liked how Kermit cheered my name. Thanks for reviewing, I like that you liked it!! |
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Oh, good Lord! I knew the girls had the potential for being daft yet... *shudders*
Again, very nice story. Very fluffy. You really hate the Divination professor, don't you? Second rant of Hermione's. I confess, I usally only read harsher--erm, naughtier, H/Hr stories but I like the little moments that you capture in your own stories. And you're quite the prolific writer, aren't you? Second story in as many days. Well done. Keep it up. |
Author Feedback: THANKS!!! 
I know, I give Trelawney a bad wrap, but she just rubs me the wrong way. And I think Hermione feels the same...(shifty eyes)
Oh, and I guess I've never liked Parvati and Lavender, either. They probably aren't really that stupid, but from Hermione's point of view I suppose they are! JKR hasn't really said much about them, just that they're estrogen-filled teenage witches, so I took that and ran with it.
Thank you so much for you wonderful feedback, it really makes my day!!
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Really adorable. Harry and Hermione are just so sweet together. I'm looking forward to reading your chaptered H/Hr story too. |
Author Feedback: Oh, thank you! Yes, it's still in the woodworks- I've got a few one shots I want to get out of the way first, but I'm eager to try a chapter fic. I've done mostly humor with H/Hr and not so much angst (unless it was humorous from Hermione ) and the story I've got cooked up is a little dramatic. Not OH MY GOD- but it's a little different than my previous works. I have a dramatic chapter fic with L/J, but I'm letting it ferment a bit because it's LOOOOONG one; my H/Hr should take ages to read. Anyway, sorry for talking your ear off  and thanks for the review!!
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This piece is incredibly cute! I loved how Harry had an "arrow" pointing to her. Very sweet 
Vio |
Author Feedback: Thanks, when I read the lines back my heart just melted into my lungs. I love writing fluffy/fuzzy/feel-good pieces! (with a hint of Hermione-rant  ) Glad you enjoyed the fic, thank you for the review! |
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and now we can see that even divination can be good for something |
Author Feedback: Of course 'missbrightsidex' would think so! Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you caught that |
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Really good story. I think the part about the lovelines were really sweet. |
Author Feedback: Awwww thank you! |
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Oh my gosh!!!! That was so sweet! I love it!
Okay, this line had me laughing:
"You have very sweaty palms."
"Harry!"
And this one had me rolling on the floor:
"One time she asked me if unicorns had periods. What kind of a question is that?? "
This one had me swooning:
"He leaned in to kiss me, our palms finding one another as he played with my hair, stroking the curly chestnut laying upon my shoulder. Sunlight filled the gloomy corridor, radiating from our lips as two fortunes became one. Our love lines intertwined, a true match made in heaven, and I never badmouthed divination again."
Oh, I realized one thing: be it with your fics or your replies, you liked using the phrase "At any rate," LOL. Don't mind me, I'm just good at noticing stuffs like that.
Oh, and one thing I noticed, too, is that you post stories so fast. It's amazing! It takes me ages to come up with a good one-shot and you, you're practically updating everyday. Amazing!
I loved this particular story because it is filled with fluff and served as an awesome respite from all the angst of RL.
Love your stories! Keep it up! |
Author Feedback: Thank you thank you thank you!! You know, I suppose I do say that phrase quite often. At any rate ** ** I'm glad you found those lines so appealing, I love it when readers tell me specifics! Thanks for ALL of your wonderfully positive feedback, you really inspire me to continue writing for this ship. I'm so grateful for you taking the time to tell me what you think- can't thank you enough
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