TechnomadSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/11/09
So Ginny has a mare patronus? It figures. I don't know---was that in canon? What does a mare signify, I wonder? I know that patronuses are symbolic---Snape's doe of his love for Lily Evans, Harry's stag of his yearning for a father, and Hermione's otter because JKR likes otters. (I should look up the symbolic significance of a hare sometime---that's Luna's patronus, according to canon.)
And when Ginny finds out what happens, the fewmets are going to hit the windmill. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/11/09
Haha awesome!!! best chapter so far i was really waiting for an h/hr moment and i was so not dissappointed keep it up i can\'t wait for the next one!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/11/09
Haha awesome!!! best chapter so far i was really waiting for an h/hr moment and i was so not dissappointed keep it up i can't wait for the next one!!! |
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Bravo, braavo! I read this on another site, too, as you know, and I think this is a brilliant addition to the story. Actually seeing some of Harry and Hermione's interaction, once all of the love potion mess has been sorted, is lovely and sweet and advances the plot, all at the same time. Very nicely done! |
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Great, great, GREAT chapter! Plenty of Pumpkiny Harmonious goodness. I lapped it right up, let me tell you. Ginny's an annoying twat, but what else is new? Can't wait to see her get her comeuppance. LOL that Hermione pretty much figured out the love potion thing without Harry telling her and his staying true to his promise to Luna not to confirm her suspicions quite yet.  Can't wait for more! |
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Great fic, I really am enjoying this story and can't wait until the next chapter. One thing, however: "Harmonices Mundi" does not mean "Harmonies of the worlds" in Latin. You meant "Harmoni Mundi." "Mundi" is "of the world" (singular). "Mundorum" is "of the worlds" (plural). But that's just me being a picky grad student (I'm a Medievalist, I do lots of Latin translations). Your story is one of the best out there. I really do look forward to the next update. Hopefully not too long from now, yeah? |
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BexisSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 01/11/09
This was quite nice, but I'm afraid I've lost the train of thought. I'll have to go back and read the prior chapters to see how this fits in.
- Bexis |
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Ack! Why is there no "next chapter" link? I have to know what happens next! Or rather, what has already happened, but in more detail. I adore Luna in this fic. I'm glad she stepped in, and I think all the characters are true to themselves, especially clueless Harry. I can't wait to read more! |
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Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can. |
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ladysavayUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 01/11/09
I liked the fluff but I have to admit I wasn't quite following all of thier shorthand conversation. It felt like they were speaking a langauge only they knew, like an insider chatting to another one. |
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This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. It is developing quite nicely for a foregone conclusion. |
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ooo. I hope that you will continue this story as well ( A New opening night).
you really out did your self, O I am so happy that
Harry and Hermione kiss I think mite (boom!)
Sorry that only happens when I read About Harry and Hermione kiss.
But till then have a real good week and weekend.
 fade out to black.
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Malfoy the ferrett chasing Ginny the toad...what a lovely image.  Thanks for another excellent chapter. It's a pleasure to re-read this one.  |
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I love this method of explaining all the changes in behavior between Harry and Hermione in book six. You do it better than most, as well; it's not overblown or impausible, just a sensible explanation that Luna gives, and a mistake that is fixable, though it could have some dire consequnces if not taken care of. I also love having Luna be part of the Trio; she's so knowledgable even though she's a bit strange. It's part of her charm, I think.  |
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Interesting portrayal of Luna. Poor Harry, he's so smart but he just doesn't quite grasp the social interactions. Give hm a big bad however...haha. Poor Ginny. She's so crazy in this fic. |
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