I liked Hestia. She wasn't too obvious about it. You probably could have fleshed it out a bit more, but it was still a good snapshot.

I enjoyed reading!

Umm. I love L/J fics!!! People just don't write enough of them and I'm very picky of which ones I like. Which, brings me to my point. I liked this very very much. However,I'm guessing this is a one shot.
You should consider expanding. I'll most definitely be reading.

i for one, really like the lily and james stories. i reckon this one shot was brilliant. very simple and not confusing. a fantastic idea. i am reading your other one too, i'll fight for you. please keep up the excellent work

You're right; I'm not a huge reader of Lily/James fan fic. This, however, was a sweet little piece with a happy ending, which suits my mood well. Your characterization of Hestia Jones was certainly unique and provided a nice contrast for James' relationship with Lily. Well done; this certainly gave my spirits a boost!

Oh my god. That was so sad! So I'm guessing that Hestia secretly loves James right? While, I usually don't like it when something like that happens, this was really good! It's so weird though...Harry met Hestia in OOTP....yeesh.