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This is how it was supposed to be in the series. She is hurting, he needs her, he takes care of her so bad that Rowling had to mess it up. |
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shadyBLUESigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/09
me likey. ...  ... love the humor at the ending. hehehe. though a bit unclear. i mean its just a scene expanded. very well written. |
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I am pretty much in love with this one-shot. I think you portrayed Harry and Hermione's interaction really well. And I'm glad to see them cursing, because in fics and in canon I just can't fathom how they wouldn't be, it's a war! This was really great, I'll be reccing this to some friends |
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penrod919Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/09/09
Sorry, I agree with anonymous - bad choice with all the foul language. How is taking God's name in vain a stress reliever? Strange |
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MikeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/09/09
I really liked this story in spite of the circumstances (i.e. Hermione's wound). Thanks so much for this very well done one shot. |
Author Feedback: thank you, that's incredibly kind of you to say!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/09/09
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Author Feedback: I'm sorry, but i think it's realistic. it's a war, harry is angry, hermione is tired, temperaments aren't the most controlled, and using that sort of language, in many ways acts as a form of stress relief.
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that was a great story. thanks for posting it . you wrote it very well, and i know your finished with this and you will probably not write more on it but i would love anothr chapter |
Author Feedback: i'm afraid that this will, most probably, definitely be a stand alone piece as i really should focus my attention on in retrospect... i may consider doing a follow up piece later though, something just after the war... idk really.
thanks so much for the positive feedback |
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Now where the fuck was this in Deathly Hallows? (pardon the language, but SERIOUSLY now, JKR!)
H&H4EVA
Hermione Rae |
Author Feedback: LOL, that's why i personally couldn't read that book. primarily, i just wanted harry to die, thought he had too and when i found out that he doesn't AND he marries Ginny... well it was all downhill from there 
thanks for reviewing!
cosmo
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TechnomadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/09/09
I could easily see them interacting like this. They're both close enough to the legend to not be overawed by it...and they both need people to remind them that they are not infallible, invincible, or immortal, no matter what their mindless claques say. |
Author Feedback: oh thank you!  wow, you have no idea how much this means to me to hear, thank you! |
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Aw. I really liked this story too! I've been reading a lot of one shots lately and it's been awesome. Usually I settle in for the long haul with a couple of stories, but I've been happy to see several one shots. Hope I see more! |
Author Feedback: yeah, one-shots can be a lot of fun to read since you can just do it in one sitting (or so i think) long stories you really need to find the time to catch up on them which can be rather daunting at times... or so it is for me, lol.
as for seeing more, well i will deff write more pieces  |
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SALETHUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/09/09
Wonderful. Yeah, we miss "In retrospect", but, if you continue to write little fics like this, so full of emotion and a sense of completion that is just right, then I guess, on my part, that not only the wait will be sweeter but I'll love you as an author even more! 
Thanks! |
Author Feedback: i'm trying with "in retrospect", truly, but it just doesn't seem to be coming. i know everything that i want to write (in the two last halves of scenes i have left) but i just can't seem to get it down onto paper. it's so weird...
i am deff considering writing more one-shots and all the like between though, something to force my hand at this and get me bolstering over IR again.
thanks for reviewing!  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/09/09
Yay. That was really really cute. I enjoyed that. Lovely job. I loved how they were fighting despite the fact that Hermione was hurt. Great job. |
Author Feedback: aw, thank you, i'm so happy to hear that, truly! |
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I love this piece.
Their banter made the tension in this scene very palpable. I love Hermione when she's right and she knows it. Harry's a very lucky fella. To hell with Ron!
Good show! |
Author Feedback: lol, well she IS Hermione Granger, ergo she's always right |
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