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addisonj
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/10
These are my favorite quotes:
I don't want to be this guy.
When did you outgrow your teaspoon?
Nice to see Ron in a good light doing the right thing.
Author Feedback: Thank you. I think Ron's a great guy, a little thick at times, but his heart is definitely in the right place. I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you very much for taking the time to review.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/09
I simply loved reading this. Its really refreshing to read a piece where Ron looses Hermione without any Ron bashing. I mean i am an HHr guy through and through. But i always feel bad when i see a piece with a nice story yet there Ron is treated lik a piece of trash by the author. Ron is a good guy, but he just doesnt belong with Hermione. And you have portrayed his goodness perfectly with his sacrifice. Will definately be reading more of your work.
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review! I actually like Ron a great deal, but he's just not right for Hermione! His character really could have been developed more through teh series, but all of the really good qualities are there in him. I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and that I did him justice. I look forward to more of your feedback. Hope your holidays are great!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/09/09
No man with any sense of pride would tolerate friends capable of such out right betrayal and selfishness.
Author Feedback: Interesting take you have there. The point is that Harry and Hermione didn't actually do anything until pushed towards it and both single. Thanks for the review.
 

papermask
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/09/09
Another beautiful story. I liked your view of Ron in this piece. He does have some good in him. I also liked the added bit about Ron's date with Luna. Overall, lovely piece.
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I can't say I had a good time writing it, because well... it's angsty, but I did enjoy writing Ron so well adjusted lol. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the review!
 

starwberry_nerd
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/08/09
that was absolutely wonderful, usually i don't like ron much at all but this put him in a positive, and believable, light that is just fantastic
brilliant job, thanks for posting it
Author Feedback: A lot of people don't like Ron, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed this, though. I kinda wanted him to be a better guy.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/08/09
That was very nostalgic. I really liked it. I liked the ending probably the best. It was nice to see that Ron did have a chance to grieve and that he wasn't being crazy and an emotional range of a teaspoon. Great job. I really liked the flashbacks.
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I really think Ron has the potential to be a great friend and character, especially considering he's abandoned Hermione and Harry many times now. I'm glad the nostalgia came off.

Thank you so much for the review!
 

Roz
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/09
Well done, Granger Danger! I really enjoyed this story. You captured the emotions very well. I agree that Ron quite often got "shafted" by JKR, and I feel that he could have been written better. You have done a great job with him. Keep up the good work, and keep on writing!
Author Feedback: Thank you, so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Ron's character was never really seen the way we knew he was underneath. Ron's a good guy, hotheaded and a baby, but he's a good guy. I'm glad you liked this Ron!

Cheers!
 

jtrevizo_1013
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/09
This was an absolutely stunning story with beautiful descriptions and wonderful dialog. Congrats!
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you! I'm honestly very glad that you enjoyed it. Makes the writing worth while.
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/09
Good job man! You did the right thing letting her go to the one she needed. Great writing!
Author Feedback: Thanks! Very glad you enjoyed it!
 

ladylaughalot
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/09
That was perfect. You did a brilliant job, I was as in love with your Ron by the end of this story as I ever have been with any incarnation of Harry. Just between us that is really saying something.
Author Feedback: WOW. Now THAT is a compliment.

I'm very glad you liked it!
 

vanillaparchment
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/09
You have impressed me very quickly with your smooth, punchy style. This piece was well-crafted and excellently paced, and what pleased me most- other than, obviously, the difference in Hermione's last name- was the way you portrayed the two youngest Weasleys. It was a very sympathetic, very realistic portrayal- especially Ginny. Ginny's reaction was excellent.

Your progression was fantastic- the time-line flowed and the thought processes were paired with dialogue and flashbacks very naturally.

Another thing: the breakup. You successfully wrote the two things I have the most trouble with; namely, breakups and Ron. Now, we obviously have different strengths and weaknesses, but I found your grip on the trio dynamic to be very... well, impressive! It was sensitive and powerful.

A few small nitpicks (I always find it hard to believe that a guy- particularly Ron- would ever describe his best mate using his eye color as the primary identifier), but most of those are personal preferences rather than critique worthy of note. (Tiny grammar mistakes, a single formatting issue... really, nothing for you to worry about.) One thing I would pay attention to is a tiny error at the beginning: "how laughing it was..." I believe you meant 'laughable'? Though you might not want to reupload, I just thought I'd point it out.

All in all, a very impressive debut! I look forward to more. (Preferably one shots... I really do love one shots. ) Well done!
Author Feedback: Coming from you, these compliments really mean a lot. I really enjoy your writing style a great deal, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

I honestly like Ron and Ginny (Ginny less than Ron), and it's hard to find sympathetic stories to them. Glad I contributed that way a bit.

As for the eye color, I'll admit you're right there, but it seemed the easiest way to distinguish Harry before Ron's name is ever mentioned. Aside from the summary, of course. I did try to play with eye color a bit in this story, with brown meeting blue and such. And you're right about laughable, for the life of me I couldn't get that word in my head.

Thanks so much for your feedback! I greatly appreciate it! And, I've got a new one shot out, but there are grammatical errors that I'm working on fixing already

Glad you enjoyed!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/08/09
That was gorgeous. You even made me like Ginny a little bit in this. Excellent work.
Author Feedback: Thank you, and wow! I take it as a high compliment that I made someone like Ginny. Even a little.

I'm so glad you liked it!
 

saleth
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/08/09
I like this fic. Ron's POV is a very good one, and is wonderful the way he slowly saw things regarding Harry and Hermione's relationship.
It was ver well written, and there are lovely "Harry and Hermione" moments there that I just loved.
Very good.
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
 

cakeandmilk
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/08/09
Oh.my.gosh.

This is beautiful. I think, now, you've finally given Ron justice as the insensitive prat and imperfect character as well as the loving best friend. Good job!

I like your style of writing. Employing flashbacks made your story colorful. Nicely done.

I'm planning to write a piece with Ron's POV. I'm just not sure about how I would make it work, though. But your piece gave me a little push towards...the right direction (?).

Anyway, Congrats!
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Ron can be a complicated character, and I love writing him.

Can't wait to read your Ron POV story!

granger_danger
 

HermioneRae
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/08/09
“When did you outgrow your teaspoon, Ronald Weasley?” - OMG, you're going to have patent that line because it punctuates one of the most poetic pieces I've ever read on here.

I'm actually... I really don't think I have much to say about this... That rarely ever happens.

Please write more.

H&H4EVA
Hermione Rae
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! Honestly, I just kept seeing this one scene between Hermione and Ron. That line seemed to just say everything that needed to be said between them.

I'm so honored that you felt this way about my writing and what a compliment! Thank you so much for taking the time to respond! It means a great deal.

I'm already working on another piece. Just tweaking the specifics. I am so glad you enjoyed this.

granger_danger
 

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