Um. I'm speechless that was so incredibly hot. I wish I could write like that..... I don't suppose you have any ideas for a second chapter?

Kinky and a bit unusual. it's great

I like the irony of the Black Family History book. I can see how the irony arouse both of them.

Wow, I haven't heard that topic done before. I really thought that was interesting. Lovely job. That was quite the fanfic. Way to capture the need and desire that Hermione felt. I absolutely loved it.

effing hot. i love it. this so should've happened in DH - Grimauld, the tent, the chamber... everywhere!

Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

Yeah, it has been done before, but I really love the level of detail that you provide here.

I encourage/challenge you to consider a second chapter...one which documents in the same level detail a three-way between H/Hr/book. Can you fully integrate her relationship with books with a relationship with Harry?

A bit of PWP with no fallout or followup. Not bad for PWP. Although this seems more like something I'd find on ASSTR.org than Portkey.

That...was...hot. Did I just say that? I know she loves books and all but wow. But they should've just had normal sex...that was really weird that they were masturbating each other with books. Oh well I loved it. Different take on Hermione for sure!