Very good story so far, really nicely done on how everyone is feeling and reacting...

Also I would like to say well done on the speed and the time it is taking for everything to move on, and you've captured that very well indeed.

Can't wait, keep it up.

I.R.

Great chapter!

I realy like the way the story is being written. very original. It's nice to read that Harry went to Kingsley for help to get James to st Mungos, but couldn't he would have to leave him in a muggle hospital to be healed. what is also interesting to this story is that you have the Muggle world & the Magical very much intertwined in this story. I hope that james comes out of this with no brain damage, hope that his magical side get;s him thru this..

Hmm, father like son? I just hope that Hermione finds it in her heart to finally want to help Harry & his children heal? and that this will get Harry to recognise his addiction for him & his childrens sake...

really looking forward to reading the next chapter...

Aw this chapter is sad I hope James's surgery goes really well and his brain gets fixed... I hope he doesn't have brain damage.... Poorkid has already been through enough as it is. Great job on the story and I can't wait to read the rest of it. You're doing a great job! Keep up the great work!

Nice wake-up call... As usual, I hope the chapter would be longer but alas, you're the writer, hehe.

Will be waiting.

Rosali

Excellent chapter! Never in a million years did I suspect that something like this could happen! Great twist. I hope that things get better for both the Potter and Weasley clan soon!!

nice, really the choice between worse and even worse, i really like it but it's a bit short i think.

I don't see how they as in The Magicals can NOT help! So the real thing next chapter is to get him to St.Mungos!
All the while hoping Hermione can talk to harry before he drinks himself to death!

dennisud

One can only hope that this horrible accident will bring the family back together. Hopefully James will come thru it and be a better person for it. Hopefully both James and Harry will find each other and STOP drinking!! Hermione will need to keep them strong and take charge, because Harry can't do it alone.

Nice twist...still really enjoying this story even if I am very upset with James.

Poor James... I feel bad for the kid but Lily is right... He has to do something rather than ignore his dad and yell at him all the time. Great job on the story. I hope Hermione and Harry will make up soon though.. Update soon!!!!

I find it hard to understand that Harry is not close to his first child, as much as he craved a family of his own. James is mad at the world and he needs counseling....he can't hate all the people that love him. I just can't see Ginny being that GREAT a mother that he only communicated with her!! Albus and Lily get along fine with Harry.....even Hugo and Rose love him. James has more problems than just not knowing his dad. Now....back to Hermione and Harry.....she must make the first move....he isn't capable of it!! It is TIME for them to start finding each other.....

Good luck with the writing!!

I really missed this story, i must say though i think hermione is being a tad unfair about the whole situation, well i hope it all sorts it self out anyway......

I wish the conversation between Rose and James had taken place at the beginning of the chapter or something like that. The same happened with this chapter than with the last one: very little happens and the story is moving a bit too slow, imo.

Anyway, you know I'll be waiting.

Cheers!

Rosali

I'm wondering what Harry has been up to latley? since him & Hermione parted ways weeks ago, and been living alone in their perspective homes??.....

Such a sad situation with James , all this time and him feeling uncertain about life becuase he dosen't know his father at all! where was Harry when James was a baby and growing up?? was he really that absent from his home that much for James to feel this way? if so then I think lily should say the something to Harry what she said to James..then that will get Harry to realise what the real problem is with James?

I JUST HOPE THAT WHEN HARRY REALISES HE REALLY DOSEN'T KNOW HIS SON, AND THAT HE MISSED OUT ON ALOT WITH JAMES AS HE WAS GROWING UP, THAT IT DOSEN'T SENDS HIM MORE INTO THAT DARK PLACE WHERE HE IS FINDING COMFORT..

Hermione needs to get her head out of her ASS! and do what she needs to with her BEST FRIEND! She's so smart but with this she is being really dense??? does she honestly think she can let this go on any longer! be without Harry? first day back & rosie already new something was wrong??

okay Harry & Hermione lets stop this nonsence and start talking & helping each other, because clearly you two need each other to heal...

until next chapter

this chapter was quite short, didn't really satisfy my curiosity. Please update again.

i hope you have the time and chance to update this story.