i really am enjoying this story so far i hope you are not going to abandon this like you did "Anything!" this so far seems like you could take this and run far with it but i do hope to read more of this story soon and i hope you keep it as interesting as it is so far

Another nice chapter, good job. So three Horcruxes are gone now, only the last one to find and take down. Good.

Whoa, this was long Anyway, good job. I'm glad Hermione in the end released Luna from her oath, to be honest I've never agreed with it in the first place, if they can't freely trust their own friends, then they are not going to win the war, and Luna is definitely one of their friends.

Interesting twist with Ginny, and the rest of the chapter was good too, although as usual pretty complicated

I'm not sure I like the way so many stories portray DD as a manipulative old man, so I won't comment on that part of your story. But I can for sure tell that things are getting more and more complicated, at least they have three Horcruxes ready to be destroyed, if only they can find out how.

Well, this surely complicates things. but if Hermione has to share Harry, well I wouldn't want it to be with anyone else than Luna. I've always liked the girl, so if it's her then it is somewhat ok

I think that this is close to where you ended the first attempt of this story.

I've really enjoyed the re-writes and the pacing of this story.

I have always liked how Luna acted in this chapter. I can see a young Luna being charmed by the older Bill and then transferring that attraction to Ron. This part has been well written and enjoyed.

I'll be looking forward to more of this story soon I hope.

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Nicely done, some of the pacing regarding Luna has changed in this rewrite of this story. I think that was one of the problems that I had with it the first time.

I liked the flow of this chapter and how it sets up for the meeting with Bill.

Thanks for putting this part up so quickly, I looking forward to getting to the new peices of this story soon.

"I cannot accept her as a friend if I know she is a slave." Truer words were never spoken. Hermione is very intelligent, but she occasionally loses to Harry in Wisdom.

Love the story so far and am continuing to read it.

i love this story, i remember it originally, i'm glad its being worked on as it was a very interesting tale

again, a well written chapter. I curious to see what the changes are from the original version to this one as a result of Hermione releasing Luna from her oath. Bringing the time-turner from third yera back to explain a bit was good., although all three of them are going to be out of sync with their wizarding id cards by the time this is over .

Looking forward to the next installment

Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
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Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

Great update, things are moving faster and faster. I really like your interpretation of Bill so far and your Ginny might just turn out to be alright after all.

Thanks for posting new parts so frequently.