Wow, that was good. Of course Harry needs her! And he loves her! He just needs to… say it more often, right? And not just when they’re being physically intimate with each other or indulging into… certain activities.

Good job! It’s a very descriptive story. It took me into Hermione’s absolute longing to feel Harry’s love. Every word and analogy you did struck to the point.

Three stars!

Nicely done, dear. I like her passionate plotting to own him completely.

'I think I see what you were doing, you were just using my story to do it with.'

Sorry but I don't understand what you mean, either.

The thing is, I am had been taught in a decent, old fashion way that, we girls should have our own pride and dignity to not just wait for boys to see us and feel for us like we for them. If they don't see us, fine, we'll find another one who'll see us.

In my case, I had never had intention to find anyone, but 'someone' did find me. Now we have a happy and 'ideal' marriage with a girl and a boy.

As an obsessed reader, I always consider Hermione like my own daughter when I read a story. I want my daughter to be happy yet still proud and independent. I don't want her to just desperately wait for a boy who is stupid not to see her at the first time but give him up and find someone else who is smarter. Someone who will loves, cherishes her and take care of her for the rest of thier lives, someone who her parents can trust to give her away to him. That's why I feel offended everytime I read a story the way you've written.

Besides, I myself had written a H/Hr story in my own language that is not English. But I wrote the way I've always longed to see but hardly found except for the two authors I'd mendtioned.

Aplogize for the long explantion, an old woman's habit.

Nice piece, Though it would have been good to see if he already thinks of her the way she wants him to.

I've briefly read all your stories. You are one of the wonderful authors indeed.

Only, despite of writing from HIS POVs, you didn't describe HIS thoughts and feelings about HER as much as you did from HERs. What I found was what HE experienced and/or what HE did, that's all. Unlike when you wrote from HER's, you described so clearly, for example, 'She wanted to be the only thing that really mattered in his world; the only thing that he would ever truly need. She wanted his love, his deep unfathomable love.' Sorry, but didn't see such things from HIS.

Just a Comment, not a Critic. REPEAT, just a Comment, not a Critic.

Sorry for thinking I insulting you or other authors. Never mean to.

The thing is, I've found so many, many stories that SHE falls in love with HIM and waits for HE loving HER back, as yours and many other authors'. Always wonder why can't be the other way around? Why can't HE fall in love with HER First and wait for HER?

Don't you feel you are beloved and precious if you know your guys feels for you and wait for you to return his feeling? Instead of you wait for him? So many stories contain the lines as yours, so many that I started to think that may be the way your real love-lives are. That's all.

Bingblots's and Amynoelle's writings are opposite. Many times they wrote about how HE loves and needs HER, trying to win over HER. Why other authors don't like to write that way?

Once again, sorry for making you feel bad with my review. Just a Comment, not a Critic. Only my own opinion. Absolutely Not your story is not good, it really is.

Regards,

^_^

I wonder, have you written from HIS POV that HE thinks about HER the same way?

There are so many, many stories similar to this. Stories about how SHE loves HIM, needs HIM, and how SHE wants HIS love back. So many stories that make me think, "Oh, this must be how the Western women are, Europeans and Americans. The men are so lucky to be beloved, precious to them. Will those guys ever know that? Do they love their girls the same way? Do the women feel beloved and precious by their men?

So far I see, there are only Bingblots and Amynoelle who constantly write from HIS POV which HE feels and thinks about HER that way. In my opinion, maybe because they are beloved and precious to their men, which, may influence to thier writing.

Hope your and other authors' writing are just from your imagiation, not effected by your real lives.

Wow... This is intense!!

Hermione seems a tiny bit (ironic) obsessed. Not with Harry, but, I guess, with the concept of how Harry should love her (in her mind). A little creepy, but I can understand how someone like Hermione would feel insecure in a relationship, and would base her opinion of how a relationship should work on a book, or a past event.

And, well, it IS romantic, the way Henry VIII acted. What girl doesn't wan that?

Cheers

That was positively one of the loveliest pieces I've read. Hermione's thoughts on her love for Harry are very powerful, I think. No one really goes into what she really and rawfully craves. And this is very beautiful.

I love this, it's so passionate and so moving! Fantastic writing! I will be reading more of your stories!