AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 18/10/09
Awesome story. Please keep up the great work and please update again soon. |
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omg. ur back!  ) i've been waiting for this for quite some time now.  |
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nice story.. i\'ll be waiting for the next chapter.. ^_^ hope you update soon! |
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CokieismeSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 15/10/09
Lovely story. Last chapter, oh boy! I can't wait for the next one!!! |
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LockeSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/10/09
This chapter was refreshing. You have a really strong Luna, making her as the godess she was named after. I think you go more into Hermione's thoughts on Ron leaving during the Hunt than any other fic i have read. Interesting ideas there. Usually Hermione leaves Ron in my experience, having hints of the opposite happening is quite intriguing. Uniqueness is becoming quite rare today, do not let yours slip away. |
Author Feedback: I never thought that perspective was very unique, guess I was wrong. I do however feel that Ron and Hermione's relationship is based on mutal insecurities that are not in and of themselves reason enough to build a relationship. As for Luna she is a jewel and a joy to write. Thanks for the thoughtful review. |
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NatashaUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/10/09
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Author Feedback: Thanks I am pretty pleased with the story so far and I am glad you are enjoying it as well. I hope things work out for you and your Ron with Harry qualities... hmmm I like that phrase I may borrow it for the story. Cheers! |
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arlithilSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/10/09
I needed to review so that I'll get the story alerts. I did one a few seconds ago, but this is a great story you got here! |
Author Feedback: Thanks. |
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arlithilSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/10/09
I really like this self-evaluation that's going on. Sets a good perspective before they're back in the present. Great chapter! |
Author Feedback: Self evaluation is very important and as you say it does wonders for the perspective. Glad you're enjoying things so far. |
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arlithilSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 14/10/09
Yeah you did! Well I'm proud of him! Even though he didn't plan to kiss her without professing his feelings it worked out anyway, cause if she didn't reciprocate then he'd at least get a kiss. Great chapter! Best one yet! |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it. |
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arlithilSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/10/09
Arylgaluffs lol. Then again you can make up just about any magical creature to suit your needs. Luna's just cool like that. Harry needs to act...right about...wait for it!...NOW. Nice chapter. |
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arlithilSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 14/10/09
That was a nice day they shared. I'm kinda hoping Hermione's single at this point, I never enjoyed the thought of Ron and Hermione. I really liked this chapter. |
Author Feedback: Ron and Hermione are a bit hard to swallow as a couple. But I don't think you'll be too pleased with the up coming chapters. |
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Re: Author Feedback: Sorry for the constant cliff hangers but I am glad you like it so far. Ron's reaction will depend on how he finds out I think. What do you think... should she leave off with him and not mention Harry or should she tell him about her feelings for Harry and his for her?
-- Wait, I'm not sure I understand your first question. Are you asking if she should leave Ron and not mention Harry? If that's what you're asking then my answer is it depends. Does she trust Ron to be mature enough to accept that she can never learn to love anybody but Harry? But then again according to this chapter (and indirectly, GoF and DH), "it had been so easy for Ron to walk away from her (from them), the person(s) he claimed to care for more than anyone else." A sign of immaturity for me.
But there's still the fact that Ron still deserves to know why she would leave him. But for me that's just really cliche too goody goody. Harry's and her apparent hasty forgiveness of Ron's abandonment is just so unrealistic. Maybe she should test him, talk about the current situation in a third person's point of view and see how Ron would react. Then it's up to you if she would tell her about Harry's and her feelings.
God, I'm excited! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the feedback I am presently trying to sort out my approach and your ideas have helped to give me the direction I plan to move in. I would tell you but I don't want to ruin the entire chapter for you, thanks again. |
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Once again, a very well written piece. Very thoughtful and insightful. I look forward to reading more!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks I'm glad you think so. |
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KinikeensUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/09
I only just noticed this fix And I coulndnt stop
Reading!! Update soon please  |
Author Feedback: Glad you like it! |
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arlithilSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/10/09
Just for comfort eh? Crazy guy, at least he's not confused anymore. Great chapter! |
Author Feedback: The daft things we tell ourselves...  ! |
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