Very well written and the best out of the four. The quote is appropriate and wonderfully compliments the story. It shows the maturity of Ginny along with the Harry/Hermione fluff.

i like how you almost have a camera lense (i'm such a lit major )which you use to zoom in and zoom out on crucial details, almost bringing the reader into the scene and then moving in on the little details you want him/her to see... very interesting.

p.s. i hate ginny, always have... unless she's with neville

That was an excellent one shot! I thought you did a good job of describing Ginny's part in this whole event. Great writing!

I have read all three of them. Momment, choices, and loss. funny thing that i am most touched by Loss. Usually it's a one shot of Harry and Hermione that touches me the most but reading how Ginny reflects on something that she lost and finally realizes that 'that' something is never hers in the first place, kind of sum it all up.

It seems that flowers are prettier when we admire them from distant among their natural habitat not when we pick them up and admire them in our hand. Reading Ginny's reflection, seeing Harry and Hermione from other's point of view, is confirming Harmony at their prettiest. It's something that makes their happiness real.

Great Job! I think Ron's POV is not necessary because Ginny's is deep and astounding already, but if you decide to write it then i'll be looking forward to it.

Again very touching. Bravo!!

I really liked Ginny's point of view. You did a fantastic job

This was fantastic. I'm loving this series at the moment, gaining everyone's perspective. I hope you can keep it up.

ouch. but hey, that's the reality of the whole thing. the whole thing that i didn't find in the HBP and DH.

but anyway, seems to me that whatever hurt that she's feeling stemmed from the fact that she assumed that she and harry are meant to be.

if that's the case, then i fully understand why, after five long years, she still feels the pain. it's really hard to let go of someone that you have seriously thought as yours. not to mention seeing him happy with the other woman. yeah. ouch.

again, a beautiful piece from you.

I really liked this, but I couldn't get the point that you were trying to make in the last paragraph. I thought that you portrayed the pain that Ginny still feels well. I am a little concerned that she's not passed this after five years. You write very well. Great job!

This piece, along with Choices and Moments, is perhaps some of the best personification of happy and bittersweet memories that i have ever read. I actually feel really bad for Ginny here. The fact that she has to live with the fact that she let the love of her life get away and has to see how happy he is without her must be extremely painful and heartwrenching. No wonder she didn't come th Harry and Hermione's wedding.

pretty good. I liked the main story, so the diff perspective is cool. You should keep going, from other POV's of course.

That last bit sounds very painful.You did a wonderful job conveying Ginny's side on this. She doesn't sound bitter but still hurt. She did let him go and he came back. I don't think she has accepted that he wasn't hers to begin with She's delusional

Wonderful veou pont of Ginny.
I love it now all we need is Ron to do the same we be all set.
You really put heart into it this story.
Excellent,cool,real top stuff.
I hope to read the next story that you come up with.
I am so looking forword to the next story.
But till then have a real, real,real Good week and weekend.
Looney Warner Mouse " Good after noon and good night and good luck!"

I'd have liked to know more about what Harry and Hermione were thinking, but since it's told from Ginny's perspective I suppose that wasn't really possible. Not unless Harry came back and tried to make his own explanations and apologies. The bittersweetness of this kind of made me feel bad for Ginny. I don't like her, but I still found myself hoping that 5 years later, she's not still pining for what she wished could have been. I hope she's moved on.

Thanks for posting this.

I really like it, I think you made Ginny look very self contained. Are you going to do Ron\'s POV?

Can't help but feel sorry for Ron and Ginny in these fics, even if they're two of my least favorite characters. But I can't feel too bad since Harry and Hermione are together.