caprixSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 17/01/10
Wow...just had to say this before moving on to the next chapter. The memorial idea? Absolutely wonderful. So emotional with few words. And absolutely appropriate with the right balance of sorrow, reverence and defiance. Lovely! |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 20/12/09
An interesting insight into the patronus theory. Very creative indeed. And in half a sentence we learn about Draco. Even if I don't really like the idea of that nasty piece of work going through life unscathed like everybody else. But then - you have made Dudley into a nice guy, so I'll believe anything. |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 20/12/09
Funny how, even though they are not at all related, the twins seem to be worthy successord of Gred and Forge. You have really created two extremelx lovable characters here. Serve Rita right, too. I wonder, though, how much she'll appreciate the free buffet she's going to get.
A beautiful and touching episode with Prongs, together with the explanation. and the pun bug lady - lady bug is pretty, too. Even though the term lady can only be used very loosely with Rita. |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 20/12/09
You certainly have a mind for the more sophisticated details of British provincial governments and their subtleties. And I do like it that Lavender turns out to be very different from the ditzy airhead she is usually made to be. A nice idea of revenge on Padma, too.
And why am I not surprised at the off-hand way you introduce Nordic mythology here? |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 20/12/09
An enormously wide arc from the humour of Chastity/Padma/Lavender via the political satire of Dublin/London/Quebec/Ottawa etc. to the moving melancholy memorial ground.
And amazing to see your wide range of knowledge, including perfect Latin. |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 19/12/09
A devilish little potion, that one. Thanks for another hilarious chapter. Of course there must be s reason why thosce contraceptive charms failed. After all, they were cast by the two most powerful people of their time... |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/12/09
Nookomis? Do house-elfs have a way of predicting this sort of thing so very quickly after it's happened? Very nice way sto end this chapter.
Petunia Evans? Has she got a divorce from Vernon? Not that I'd blame her, mind you... |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/12/09
OH yes, so Harry is perhaps Irish? Fantastic new chapter once again, even if it's perhaps a bit hard to swallow Padma should be dating Kingsley - he could be her bloody father! I can very well imagine the scene with the mistletoe, as well as Hermione's reaction to it.
And the Socialist Wanker wouldn't be called Gordon, by any chance? |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 19/12/09
Absolutely screamingly funny. Those kids are unbelievable! But you know - you are a bit of a cheat: You leave everything that happened that fateful night to your readers' imagination. Now I'm sure you wanted to keep the harmless rating up, but still...
So Dudley has married a witch? Who'd have thought it? I do sense a complete story behind that, a story which you should consider writing. Just the idea of Vernon learning about it...
One thing confuses me though: "Shakespeare in the park"? |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/09
My, you are a fantastic writer! This is so hilarious! Teddy is indeed a dear, and Harry's cluelessness is unbelievable. Interesting to see how very different this Ginny is from your other takes. And Teddy's remark about the cot and pram are simply priceless! |
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I'm really enjoying this story, keep up the good work!! L |
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This is a great story i wish there was more please add more i would like to know what happens next |
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I love your Bill! Very charming. I absolutely love your "moment" when Hermione got her letter, that's just so exciting. I'd love to read a fic about that! Wow, suddenly everything has gone topsy-turvy no? Also, glad to see Parvati again. I also really like that you've added a big bad! |
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Ah, the plot thickens! Still enjoying this one very much; looking forward to more.  |
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Wonderful as all ways to read your story's.
I gave this story 8 stars and two  .
I love it, you out did your self with excellent story.
I am on my way to the next one to read called
( Case and Effect) it's fun to read all the story's.
But till then have a real good week and weekend.
Looney Warner Mouse " Good night and good luck!"
see you soon. |
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