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ahahahahhaaaaaaa Im nothing but eager to see how this will... develop
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I...really am at a loss for words. I even think that at a loss of words is an understatement. Loved every single detail about it, for it didn't sound raunchy or perverted but actually real and loving! Good job~ |
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I...really am at a loss for words. I even think that at a loss of words is an understatement. Loved every single detail about it, for it didn't sound raunchy or perverted but actually real and loving! Good job~ |
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This was one of the first stories of yours that I read, and I've sinced worked my way through just about all of them. Your grammar and editing are generally excellent, which I truly appreciate, your description is lovely, and I really enjoy your interpretations of the characters as adults. Thank you. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 25/07/09
It might be billed as a pwp but damn if that wasn't delicious and satisfying to read. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/09
Loved it. Can't wait to get to the next chapter. I know it's gonna be good |
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Ess412Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 17/07/09
grreat story
i really enjoyed this one and all of your others
can't wait for the next one |
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I absolutely love this story! Your style of writing is amazing and definitely one of the best I've read. All of your stories are great! Keep up the good work! |
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This was very good.
I enjoyed it very much.
Great job on it!!
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/06/09
Wonderfully satisfying conclusion! Where to start? I liked Harry enjoying the sight of Hermione in the morning, and his reasons for it, ie getting to see her vulnerable side, while at the same time still admiring her strength and acknowledging it kept him alive more than once. I loved how much the plain pajamas drew him! And Hermione confessing that she hadn't thought, she'd just acted was a lovely touch. I think perhaps one of my favorite parts of this story was the bit where Hermione was prepared for Harry to want to monopolize her time as Ron had, and Harry understood her and had no wish to do just that.
Lovely, lovely story! |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/09
Awww. Poor oblivious Harry, wanting to see Hermione and not even realizing why at first! And I liked that he didn't even really wonder why he wanted to see her, then rationalized it anyway even as he's creeping towards her door. And the line about how he'd suffer pangs of conscience later and then the quick dismissal was *great*!
I also enjoyed his jealousy over the "unknown prick" and his shock at realizing who Hermione was fantasizing over. |
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I love this story. In fact, I love all your stories. They're lovely. |
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Let's see how far Harry's imagination takes him...
Hahaha! Loved Harry's deadpan answer to how the world will "only" survive another week.
*snickers* You know, I completely forgot to tell you in the last fic how much I love that "'You don't feel dead to me,'" line. I'm glad you used it on this one too!
Hehe, Hermione turned the table on him too. Instead of him seducing her, she seduces him. ^__^
This was, once again, very sweet and good versions of Harry and Hermione as adults.
I like how Ron is always out of the way! He is with his own love: Quidditch.
Aw! So like Harry to apologize for "ravaging her." Ha! You definitely didn't hear her complaining! Seriously, who would?
Lovely job!
~*Eli |
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Wow...
Too be perfectly honest, I've never been a really big fan of solo-acts. However, your fics are very, very good! Hahaha! What a way to turn the tables! I can see how you meant that this fic was a "other-side-of-the-coin" story.
Huh...Hermione should have known Harry would be getting home late, wouldn't she? Did she think he'd be home later, though, or around that time? Did she have it planned or was in coincidence? Hmmm... *ponders*
Also, what is Harry going to do about this new-found information that the girl he loves and lusts for (love how you add - connect - them together instead of keeping them completely separate, by the way) feels the same way about him. At least, in one portion, as far as he knows.
*Off to find out* |
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oh my god. that was totally unexpected. i didn't anticipate him blurting out those words. but then again that's what makes this story really fun to read. i had a good time (*wink) reading this. definitely adding this to my faves. ;-) |
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