It's great to read your stuff again, Gil! Sorry this chapter was such a pain to write. It was fun to read, though. I love that Minerva was Harry's original godmother. You don't see that very often. Here's hoping the Grangers will be amenable to a Potter wedding soon!

wow it was great, except the accusations on dumbledore. But that is to be expected as I'm a Dumbledore fan.
But i really like ur writing style and i'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it will be sooner than what u took to post this chapter.
First i wanted to vehemently protest the accusations o Dumbledore and say that the accusations were too far-fetched, but then i realised that it didn't matter as this is ur story and there would be no point in defending Dumbledore.
That being said i once again want to mention how much i like ur writing and would want u to write more though i wish u would keep the Dumbledore bashing to a minimum.
Keep up the great work and Thank You!!

Oh holy shit this just keeps getting better and better but I do have one complaint and that is that you use too many of these long winded metaphors and similies once in a while is great but there were at least ten in this chapter and maybe a half dozen in a single scene

One thing are there any more paintings of Albus or was the school one the only one?And if it was will they find out what all he was behind some other way?Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

Thank you so much for updating the story. It is one unique story that was got me totally hooked! I am loving it. Hope you continue to update the story with your wonderful plot.

I loved reading this and am anxiously awaiting more. I do believe it's the most unique interpretation of soul bonds/mates that I've ever read and it's especially interesting to me the way you're tying in societal views and family histories. I also like the characterisations; this is the sort of depth I was looking for in the books.

Eh... I hate when I go to submit a review and my computer craps out. here's hoping i can remember what i wrote...

Good on Kingsley for realizing that Harry's name was written in a note on *HERMIONE'S* page. And why didn't they search Harry's name??
I really wonder what was on the page that appeared as they were leaving. Ron's name, perhaps?

I can't believe Arthur, love potions and all. Just as I was beginning to get so fired up about Molly doing all this... Especially since Ron was still so young! I mean, at eleven a pretty fair chunk of adolescents still think members of the opposite sex are icky. LOL.
And to obliviate Ginny... I'm surprised Molly didn't shank him or curse him to next century - although this IS Harry Potter... Next century isn't too far off.
Poor Susan, having to deal with that for so long :/ i was quite thoroughly relieved whenever their kiss managed to bring back Ginny's memories.
I have to wonder how Arthur managed to get Harry, Ron, Ginny, AND Hermione with love potions AS WELL AS other people. Lavender, anyone? That and to clearly have done something illegal in order to obtain it.

I really have to wonder what will happen to Arthur in the next chapter...

Damn that is a big change of pace usualy it's Molly that drugs the happy couple not a bad touch

This is cool!
And its funny too.
I really like it!
I wonder what will Hermione do with the Elder wand?

I love the fact that the villain here is Arthur unlike Molly who's so often used as the evil schemer. Things aren't always like they seem.

Good work

A chapter in the very best tradition of the whodunnit! Trust the mildest, lest suspect character to be the villain! An excellen twist of plot, very convincing, and excellently written (but this goes without saying, anyway). And in between your satirical treatment of the more blatant plot hole4s in JKR's saga. Anyone might have started thibnking after the choice of hostage for the second task...

I admit that you've introduced a new twist here. Never ever think about the male Prewwets like that.

Good job!!

What a chapter, Mr. Weasley the culprit! I never saw that coming, I always liked him. I don't know how I feel about him being the villain, lol. I can't wait to read more of the H/HR part.

never saw that coming, first time I can remember Arthur being the baad one and Molly being innocent- seen both guilty before

That was diffrent.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.