This is cool!
And its funny too.
I really like it!
I wonder what will Hermione do with the Elder wand?

I love the fact that the villain here is Arthur unlike Molly who's so often used as the evil schemer. Things aren't always like they seem.

Good work

A chapter in the very best tradition of the whodunnit! Trust the mildest, lest suspect character to be the villain! An excellen twist of plot, very convincing, and excellently written (but this goes without saying, anyway). And in between your satirical treatment of the more blatant plot hole4s in JKR's saga. Anyone might have started thibnking after the choice of hostage for the second task...

I admit that you've introduced a new twist here. Never ever think about the male Prewwets like that.

Good job!!

What a chapter, Mr. Weasley the culprit! I never saw that coming, I always liked him. I don't know how I feel about him being the villain, lol. I can't wait to read more of the H/HR part.

never saw that coming, first time I can remember Arthur being the baad one and Molly being innocent- seen both guilty before

That was diffrent.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

Thank you for the update - it was well worth the wait. It was nice to read a little more about the Weasleys - and the twists there (Whoa, Arthur!) totally threw me for a loop! Excellent job! I can't wait until it finally dawns on Harry and Hermione why Hermione and Ron's marriage didn't go through. Was that page updating the true soul bond between them or was it regitering Susan and Ginny? Will the Malfoys get their just desserts? I can't wait to find out! Please, please, please update soon!!

Oh, WOW! All the revelations in this chapter, Gil!! I feel like my head's spinning with it all! I have a hard time thinking of Mr. Weasley as the villain-- somehow Mrs. Weasley seems more believable in that role-- but wow...
Incidentally, kudos to you for actually making me LIKE Ginny in this story. (It helps that Ginny is so not-in-love with Harry.)
And you've kept Remus and Tonks alive! Thank you for that! I will never forgive JKR for killing Remus off.

As always, Gil, just love the way you write and this story is great. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hi Gil! As usual, a great next chapter in this story that is getting more and more interesting as it progresses. I'm looking forward especially to what Hermione's little secret is that she's keeping from Harry...and I like your resolution of certain issues in DH and HBP that never made a whole lot of sense to me, and not just from an H/Hr perspective - especially the "Ron speaks Parsletongue" concept. Yeah. Right.

Thanks again for keeping going on this story!

MapleMountain

Good chapter. Interesting twist that it's Arthur rather than Molly who has the problem. Looking forward to more.