Ahhh, lovely ending. I liked the proposal, very unique, to me at least.

Well! There you go. I've read them all. And damn worth it if I do say so. There are two things I find when I find really great writing. One is excellent exposition, the other is a powerful sense of immediacy. You've got both here. These always seem to verge on the profound, and occasionally, hit upon it.

Not to get too bogged down in the missed chances of JKR, but if THIS were how she did the last book, it would be a much stronger contender for my favorite book. The HHR ship makes sense, it's writers like you who bring it to life. Hell, you bring Harry Potter to life. That's not to say you always manage to avoid clichés, but your writing is earnest, and that makes up for it. I'll admit that I'm in a giving mood tonight, but even if I'm being overly dramatic in my praise, it doesn't mean I liked these any less.

Really you deserve a longer, better review than I'm giving you, but it's late where I am, and I'm tired, so this is the best I can do. I'll definitely be making a concerted effort to check out the rest of your stuff.

Aww. Amazing ending. I loved Harry\'s mini freak out. I loved the whole series though.

great storyline. short, sweet, and enjoyable. this is how the canon should have happened. Then again, as Orson Scott Card once wrote ,"the true story is not what is written on the page. the true story is what you get out of a book. make a stiry into what you need it to be in your mind."

I've been in the mood for "gentle fluff", and then suddenly you pop up on the Fanfiction Archive. Thank you for that, it was quite the refreshing breath of air, especially when paired with the song I have on repeat: You are Beautiful from Flower Drum Song by Rodgers & Hammerstein. I normally don't pair stories with songs (songfics are most annoying IMO), but I'm glad I did in this case. Ahh... now to see who else has updated recently!

Thanks,

~Salamon2

Aww, this story was quite endearing. I liked it. That last part when Harry places the ring on her finger, that was cute. I really like your writing style, and can't wait to read more of your stories.

Just short, sweet and simple with a dab of fluff. That's what H/Hr is... If it was Ron and Hermione, there would definitely be some bickering and an argument present. If it was Harry and Ginny, it would be awkward because neither of them can understand each other like Harry and Hermione do.

Perfect ending to a good set of one-shots. Looking forward to more H/Hr stories from you!

Cheers!!

Great and sweet ending!!! I hope to read more of your fics in the future

i absolutely LOVE how you ended the series, perfectly done.

oh my hary was so sweet .
The moment was s unperfect that it was perfect . I loved this part . Again It's very well written and perfect

HJP

Nice short story.
I love it.
It's was wonderful to read.
Excllent plot.
I was in youtube just a hour a go now I got a song in my head.
It's called 5 O clcok somewere.
I hope to read more of your story's soon.
Just as good as this one.
but till then have a real good weekand weekend.
Looney Warner Mouse " Good Monring, good after noon and goodnight and good luck!"
News Man" And that's the way it is!"
Portkey Pig " Tha tha tha tha tha that's all Folks!"

very ell done. an excellent ending/beginning. so very Harry, to simply act instead of asking

Awe that was cute! I loved it!! Can't wait to read more of your work!!!!

oh that was an awesoe way of ending it, omg that is just sooo sweet that was an awesome engagement of them hehehehe, KEEP WRITING KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!