chris7100Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/09
Lovely little bit of fluff. You really captured the endearing awkwardness of a first kiss. Thanks. |
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addisonjSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/10/09
yes, this is how it should have been. I love the comfortable silences between them and their first kiss. |
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EvernightSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/08/09
Excellent fic. I think it would be great to go back to that, as you said, "nice, innocent time right after OotP came out and before the disaster that was HBP". I'm tired of fics trying to un-make the mess created by HBP and DH, I just wish everyone would write their own take on what should've happened after OOTP, just like you (and many others, though not as many as I'd wish) did. Thanks for sharing your wonderful words! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/09
Awesome, wonderful story. Why didn't JKR stick you in charge of the romance parts of the books?  Seriously, though, this is a really great depiction of Harry's thoughts. I loved the way you got Hermione to help him through at least the worst of his guilt about Sirius, and the tentative beginnings of romance were so beautifully written. I really really enjoyed reading this. |
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Birlliant story, Bingblot! I'm not usually a fan of one-shots, but yours seem to make me fond of them! Great job! |
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chelley83Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/05/09
Aww that was sweet...thanks so much for writing it, i really liked it...wish it had gone that way in the books...i just always liked idea of harry with hermione than with ginny...i mean it never felt like ginny saw him, or maybe i only think that because i've read too many fanfiction  but either way, good story... |
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Wanted to add you as a favorite author. Holy cow you write a lot! That's something to admire. |
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gummyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/09
Awesome! A missing secen That could have taken place before dh! |
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aw shucks. you truly amaze me with your way of writing. i'm certainly feeling whatever was the character was feeling. keep it up. |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/02/09
This seems like a much more likely 'next chapter' than the ones we had to read. It flowed along with the story line very nicely. It was very sweet and logical, as well. Nicely done. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/09
Bingblot, you are absolutely my favourite author! I love this story as I do all of your stories. You have a wonderful way with words. I do wish things had turned out this way in canon. Looking forward to your next one. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/09
That was really cute. I liked that. Great job, a wonderful fic for a cute v-day present. Lovely |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/09
This is the way we all know how it was suppose to happen. The endearing way they kissed each other, finally letting the true feelings show, and feel  , That letting them feel this was truely their own, and at this time they were happy,and this happiness will see them to the end |
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Aww, what a cute story. I loved it. I really liked the way in which Harry realized that Hermione is the most important person to him. And the way he knew, deep down, that Hermione would completely refuse to live his side.
It was pretty good, and so, so innocent.
Keep writing like that |
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newynSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/02/09
Nothing like good old-fashioned fluff to brighten up Valentine's weekend. This is so fitting! |
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