ayumi-nbSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/09/09
Oh, Hermione, you'll frogive Ron eventually.
Oh, Harry, I could hug you right now...
Should I say it again? I love these series! |
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LockeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/04/09
ouch. this was a lot calmer than book 7, but a lot more painful in some ways. especailly thinking about Hermione must have felt during this. and poor Harry. Ron must have been in pain, too. Very awkward. |
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HazelmistSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/02/09
Once again great job, I love how it sticks to canon and then wanders just slightly so that it still seems to fit seamlessly into book 7. I loved the interaction between Harry and Hermione and that line that Ron had when Harry accidentally blurts out that things had changed. Yes they had... Cant wait to read the next one! Great job! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! |
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ainaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/09
"He didn't want to share her anymore."
Oooooh that just broke my heart there (for Harry) 
I absolutely love how your stories are sooooooo close to canon and yet give us H/Hr! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm glad you felt that line! I'm glad you're liking my little experiment with canon.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/02/09
I'm really enjoying reading all the chapters under defining the dots, this the way that the book should have been. It will be interesting to see what will happen now that Ron is back. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed the series so far. |
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lemondropUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/02/09
i really like this series  how many more sequels are there gonna be? |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you like this series! I'm not really sure how many there are going to be; in fact, I never thought I would even write one sequel to 'Defining the Dots'. I can tell you there's at least... two more on the way. I might even end up carrying this series to the end of DH. Who knows? (I don't!  ) |
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Hey Vanilaparchment, I like your stuff a lot. You write very well and I'm enjoying reading your stories. One question? Why didn't you do this as one story with chapters? It would be a shame if people didn't realize that they go together, because then they'd be missing out. Anyway, keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: Hey, I'm glad you like this!
To answer your question... when I wrote 'Defining the Dots', I'd pretty much made up my mind not to continue it. I tend to get carried away and write until an idea is dreadfully run down and boring. However, an idea for a sequel occurred to me almost directly after I'd decided not to continue writing it. After 'Filling in the Silences', I was determined to leave the story there. Obviously, even when I left it alone, it still came back to me, and I wrote another one. So, to make a long story short, this entire series was completely unplanned and just sort of... happened. Sad how that works, yeah? The other reason was, well, as I said before, I get terribly carried away sometimes, and keeping them as individual oneshots forced me to write concisely. Does any of that make sense? Hmm.... I hope that helped at least a little.  |
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hmmm, are you going to leave your interetation of 'Deathly Hallows' there? I hope not. Another good view of a scene that gives a bit more insite to how our couple feel. Look forward to seeing what the next installment covers. |
Author Feedback: Thank you for the review! And no, I've still got at least one or two left... or more than that; I'm not sure where I'm ending this. I'm enjoying writing it!  |
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