Well it was a nice chapter, would have been better if Lily wasn't so stubborn in her reaction after the kiss, but I guess it would be asking too much of her to be willing to admit she likes him right now

I really wonder who this Hope character is, right now the whole story about her seems a bit confused but I'm sure that's what you planned to achieve

Sorry for reading this only now. However it was a very good chapter, I really liked it!!

Yesssssssssss they finally have their kiss... buttttt... it also happens that she still is in complete denial!
lol
Ow and that history ... about hope and all... queer

Ahh, I'm loving this, it's really well written. I've not read much Lily/James before, but I'm enjoying this. It's addictive!

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC MATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really enjoyed reading this. everything is done to perfection as usual. keep up with the fantastic writing

FINALLY!!!! an update, and a kiss! I'm so happy right now that I'll skip right over how annoyed I was haha! Good chapter, update soon please!

This was such a good chapter! It was a little bit confusing, but I certainly understand the thing about Hope a lot better now, so thats good. I can't wait to read the next update. I'm sure it'll be very good. I'm also very glad that Lily and James finally kissed! I just wish that we could've seen it a little from his perspective. But of course this story is from Lily's so I understand lol. Update soon.
~OneLoyalReader, CedricsLove

Yeh they kiss. I hope things go okay with Hope at Hogwarts.

Looking forward to more.. The writing is already better than most!

I'm really looking for a good Lily/James story. So far I'm liking this one. Why isn't the train leaving???

Candice

This was a really good chapter, and I'm excited to see what happens in the next one. I'm a lttle bit confused, but I'm sure that you're going to explain everything eventually. I'm glad that Jame's dad is here, because i know he is going to help James and Lily figure out what is happening. I'm glad that Lily and James are still following thier feelings even though there is so much craziness around them.
~One Loyal Reader, CedricsLove

Hmm interesting. That explains the girl that been around. I wonder why she's out and thinks she lives there. Guess I'll have to wait and see.

All I can say is this: keep going!! I've been reading all summer and cannot wait to see what happens next!

absolutely brilliant update, a a very nice cliffhanger at the end. i really cant wait for the next installment