whoa.didn't expect the ending!i usually don't read one time fics but this is hilarious!u should totally make more fics like this!

Nice concept but I'm afraid I found it lacking in execution. Kindergarten students Rory and Eddy spouting off big words -- that's a bit too much to swallow regardless of the explanation that theirs is an advanced class.

That was a really funny story, kudos for that, I liked it.

That was amazing cute twist at the end especially with the advanced literature

That was amazing cute twist at the end especially with the advanced literature

Thank you for a most delightful and entertaining read! I was going crazy with calls ( I work customer service) and had been reading your story in between the sanity suckers. Thank you for giving me a good laugh when it was highly needed!

Lol.

Very nice. I loved the satire. It was funny, but still smart.

this was excellent, and hilarious, the ending was well done and i adore the idea that blocking the history channel or not allowing a child to read The Prince was a punishment, eddy and rory were both adorable and having harry and hermione there at the end was a nice touch

A whole class of geniuses - any teacher's dream, even if it can turn into a nightmare at the blink of an eye. Reading Macchiavelli, eh? Is that boy training to become the next Voldemort or something? They did indeed cheat on poor Marie - she must be quite new at the job not to have realised the sort of kids she was teaching.
Somehow I knew who Adelaide's mother must be, couldn't say how. I'd love to see her and Harry have a nice little talk to Marie...

Haha, a very predictable story, but entertaining nonetheless. I liked it a lot. The dialogue included favorite moments, of course.

very funny and unexpected story. I like how the teacher didn't know about hermione and harry until the end and how the kids act about the story, it felt like the kids knew who the hero's were and they wanted to torture the teacher. I really liked it.

Funny one shot story.
I love it.
that was fun to read,wonderful plot.
But I would lkie it to end like a cartoon.
Like this.
cue Portkey Pig.
Portkey " Tha tha tha tha tha that's all Folks!"
and now me.
Looney Warner Mouse" Good After noon and good night nad good luck!"
and now Harry Potter.
Harry" That's all Muggles!" then Hermione kisses him.
Fade out to black.
the end!

That was very, very entertaining, and a great summary of everything that was wrong with Deathly Hallows. Well done!

Very different. haha interesting
I don't know that i've read any of your other writing... though i think i'll go do that now
definately wasn't i was expecting for this story.
keep it up
-megz-

Brava! Wonderful stuff! I'd love to make a short film version of this - that would be HILARIOUS! I often find myself running little movies in my head of fanfiction/books I read anyway, so makes sense. Very nice retorts by the kids - I'm glad you had that little explanation at the end though, cuz at first I kept wondering why these children were so pretentious, but the twist was great!

Keep it up and thanks for the recommendations!

~Rae