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The Second Strike

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Fire_
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/09
YAY! Haha, I like this beginning. And the MOMENT I read their first interaction I was ``THIS IS SO JAMES AND LILY!!!!!`` Haha, one opposites attract that are awesome Aww Harry and Hermione cuteness is always good Good job!
Author Feedback: Oi! A review! Hey Hana.

I'm a fan of the James/Lily relationship dynamic...gonna try to reflect that within this story too, because it'll make the story far more interesting... Is she leading him on, genuinely interested, in denial, or just plain nuts? Stick around to find out...
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/01/09
i like it. was confused that you updated the epilogue of the first after this right. hmm so now a malfoyweasley will hook up with a pottergranger as a jameslily type realationship. ok could you just in the AN about the age and possible hookups between the families. glad non of them had kids in the first marriage.
Author Feedback: glad you do

I'm thinking of a james/lily type thing for this relationship, yeah...only instead over 7 years, it'll span one...

The epilogue of the first story was up a long time ago, but a few days ago it mysteriously disappeared along with the second last chapter, and I had to reload them...

The issue with the kids...I didn't want to overcomplicate things....
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/08
wait a minute you never finished a strike upon the hour. or a you just leaving it as is?
Author Feedback: a strike upon an hour is complete...I just changed the status today, and I had mentioned I'd do it as soon as the sequel is up - which is the case now, so part 1 can be closed, and part 2 started...
 

TogetherForever, H/Hr
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/08
Ha this was cute, I look forward to finding out who all the little ones belong to I mean I know who Andromena and Regelus belong to but you know

Love it and I can't wait for more
Author Feedback: That shall be revealed in due course...I'm still divided between making those characters central, or just supporting on the side...this fic will develop as i write it...

Glad you like it so far...I'll be alternating between FC: A Second Turn and this fic in chapter updates...
 

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