Great fic, you got Harry and Hermione done to the max. I couldn’t have written it better myself. I cannot honestly wait for more of your fics. Great read, enjoyed it immensely. There are not enough words that I know of how to express how much I really, and I do mean really enjoyed reading this.

Good story, although its missing a fair deal of emotion (Maybe not missing, but it would have been better had it been included.) Hermione comes across as a very passive person in retrospect to her original character. It could easily be said she married for the good of her son and for comfort, but what good did it really do, what would even convince her to marry him in the first place, did she even realize the finality of it, or was she planning on getting a divorce as soon as she found Harry.

Harry's emotions seemed a bit subdued as well, although it could be said that it fits his character. I, for one, would be less than pleased to find that my girlfriend had married out of necessity while I was gone. Not only would that put a large amount of strain on our own relationship, but how cruel it is to marry someone because you need them? Very uncharacteristic of Hermione...

I truly enjoy this story. I do not want Hermione to be with Ron, particularly if it means Harry would be hurt. But in stories where Ron ends up with Hermione without hurting Harry, I am all for it. Because best friends look out for each other, don't they?

In this story, I do believe Ron is a hero. His epitaph is apt.

And I don't really buy the depiction of Ron being an insensitive git almost all the time in other stories. I think Ron appears that way simply because he is protective as well as possessive of friends and family members he considers as his.

A clear example of this is when we see how Ron reacts to the notion that Hermione has a boyfriend (Krum) versus how Ron reacts to the news that Ginny has a boyfriend. His reaction is exactly the same.

That's why I believe that Ron looks at Hermione as just another sister he owns. And he fights with Hermione exactly the same way he fights with his sister Ginny.

Thanks for this story. I believe Ron is sweet and a good person and that Harry is very lucky to have him as a best friend.

i thuoght this was great i'm a h/hr shipper to an even though this is a h/c fic i thought it was so sad

That was a very good fic. I really, really liked it. It was happy in a depressing kind of way... wow, that made no sense!!! But anyways, I really did enjoy it and it was a very original story.

i thnk it was sweet of you to write something with Ron. it kinda made me
but it was

wonderful story!!!!!!!!!! It was soooo touching!!!!!!!!! It made me cry!!!!!!! Sry, I just cry really easy!!! It was so sad though…this story was like a part from a long story that I read…but this was wonderful!!!!

Haha, well just little bit hard to miss your name when your stories are practically filling the whole page. I was a bit confused at first but it came together. It was overall okay, and quite sad ending. You go! Keep writting. Although you may want to consider uploading one fic a day...or maybe one a week even. Also it was a bit short, even if it was something that would be hard to stretch on, I think you might have been able to make it longer in some way. Not bad. Keep writting.