Very cool. Nice descriptive account of the slow arousal and gratification process. Most folks usually guys and suprisingly some girls just jump right into it. Very cool.

Very cool. Nice descriptive account of the slow arousal and gratification process. Most folks usually guys and suprisingly some girls just jump right into it. Very cool.

Funny and cute so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AHAHAHA he needs a minute! I love this story. Hermione's so cutely naive, and trying to not be with her research. “'Why?' he winced." I can hear that so perfectly for some reason lmao.

The story is finished? I absolutely loved it. Hope you keep writing more stories like this.

I liked the development of Hermione realizing she wants Harry. I think the character development was very strong. I hope to read more from you.

Great story. I thought it was funny and cute and overall awesome.

Love it! Very well written, the descriptions are very good. Keep it up!

Great story! It was sweet but passionate at the same time.

Hey there;

Just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story. Cute, and silly, and quite sexy

Great story!! I loved every bit of it and I'm glad you made Harry Hermione's first and vice versa.

lol, this was cute and cheeky and fun! well done

- H

The whole story was great! Heck, the last chapter could have been a one shot all on its own. Keep it up !!!!!!http://talk.portkey.org/html/emoticons/thumbup.gif

wow i really like this fic. it was good how their relationship slowly developed an i..uh..enjoyed...the love scenes

lol seriously though bang on for the sex scenes they were pretty descriptive without being vulgar

though the only thing is that i thought harry and hermione's first time was a bit unbelievable given that harry was supposed to love ginny, so it seemed that they weren't treating sex with the proper respect. but after reading about harry's actual feelings i guess it makes sense. still seems a bit weird though...

anyway 10/10

Lovely, I loved the strawberries, even if chocolate and whip cream dont work very well in real life, it makes for great stories.

I mean, have you ever heard a story about "I want to cover you had to toe in chocolate and lick it off" Really? I mean, my tounge was so tired by the time I finished with her left leg! I finally gave up and did the job right, then we took a shower together.

Anyway, Hermione was the sexiness long before Emma Watson got the part. And I still picture her with brown bushy hair instead of blond straight hair when I read.

Oh well.

Cheers