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Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 06/07/09
I have no simphaty for Hermione. She asked for this when she rejected Harry. She asked for him to find comfort in Aurora, and really try to make that rlationship work. If she didn't want that to happen, she wouldn't have bothered hurting him the way she did.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 06/07/09
Ok, I won't go into a full rant about the angst, as you said I could always stop reading, but I won't. I now want to see how the situation evolves and is resolved, so I'll keep reading. But I want to comment on some things:

"She had done the right thing, hadn't she?" well, the fact that she's in bed crying, not eating, etc. and asks herself this to me seems a clear signal that no, she hadn't done the right thing.

"Even though the one she always had the strongest feelings for was Harry, she had always thought it just made more sense for her to be with Ron, especially when he started seeing Ginny" uhm, I can see her point because of Harry being with Ginny, however I'm not sure it makes completely sense to me to be with Ron. I mean, I could understand if she had said that Ron had asked her out and Harry didn't, but not that being with Ron makes more sense when she knew she had stronger feelings for Harry.

Now I'll go read the next chapter, knowing that we will see more of these two stubborn people (especially Hermione), unwilling to go for what they really want.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 06/07/09
Hermione thinks too much. Who cares about the Weasleys, Harry himself said it to her, what the hell is her problem? They will have each other and that's enough, with time everyone would get over it and it would all be normal again, why can't she see that is beyond me.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 05/07/09
What now, you ask. What they should have done earlier! they break up with Ron and Aurora, poor them, and then enjoy their newly found relationship. There was a reason why I kept saying Harry shouldn't have started dating Aurora, we all knew he would succumb to his feelings for Hermione, and he knew it too, so why involve another person in the mix and hurt her too?
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/07/09
Of course it will lead to something, we know it, she knows it, so she should just stop pretending she doesn't and let herself go

I really can't wait for them to break up with Ron and Aurora, it's not that those two are bad but they are simply not needed anymore so hanging onto them is only a waste of time.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 05/07/09
Well, yes, it did heat up. However, I'm curious to see how they handle it now, after all they still have partners, in one case a partner that it would have been wiser never go out with (I'm talking about Harry here, if it wasn't clear...)
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 05/07/09
I am really starting to get tired of Harry. He should decide who it is that he wants, Aurora or Hermione, because I'm frankly sick of him lusting after Hermione whenever Aurora is not around, but then keeping going out with her and acting like a lovesick puppy when they are out together.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 05/07/09
Well, Hermione moving in will surely be interesting. And poor her, she truly had an awful week When are they going to talk about the kiss? And when will Harry stop playing with Aurora? He should have never started...
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 05/07/09
About the game of chicken, I have to say that I can relate, I play it too with my friends in the summer, and I have also to say that it's a great way to flirt with the girl you like,

I think Harry should make up his mind, either he fancies Hermione or he fancies Aurora, it's not fair to his work partner to string her along just because he fears what there might be between him and Hermione, nor he should underestimate another girl's judgementhermione acted. I'm honestly starting to get annoyed at him, you know.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 05/07/09
It was good to see Hermione jealous, although their small fight wasn't that good, you know. Also, I'm still not sure about Harry and Aurora, I mean, at first we got no idea that he was interested in her, and now he was even about to kiss her? Seems a bit too fast of a transition to me. Besides, he's attracted to Hermione, can he fancy two girls at the same time?
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 05/07/09
I knew Harry would end asking Aurora out, given the time they spend together working. I just had a feeling that would happen. I'm not so sure I agree with him doing that though, I mean, sure, going there alone would have been awkward but he could just have stayed at home. Besides, if he fancies Hermione why does he describe Aurora as hot, smart, etc.? And Ron better be careful what he says, he may just get his wish,
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/07/09
Well, if that's the only intimate RHr scene we will see, I guess I can let it pass. Besides, as I said, I don't mind it that much here, it still made me cringe but much less than in other fics when they only kiss, so I guess it's okay...somewhat, at least. So they keep checking each other out, when will one of them catch the other doing it? And, is Harry single or does he have a girlfriend?
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 05/07/09
Nice one, so Hermione is attracted to Harry, physically at least. But, in the first chap she seemed to do so well with Ron, why is she contemporarily attracted to Harry too? Anyway, good job on the sexual tension between them!
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/09
Well, I have to say that this is a first. Yeah, it's the first time I read a story starting with Ron/Hermione and I'm not completely hating it. If it were written this way in the books, then I just might have believed it, you know. Maybe not as life-lasting, since some of the typical RHr troubles were present here too (he not being able to listen to her problems, etc.) but written this way, I could believe it as a temporary pairing. Good job on that. I only wonder, if it will keep working so well, how and why will Hermione's feelings change...

Also, this line cracked me up: "Some people have to be together until they're... oh, I don't know... eighty before they get to have tea then sleep, but us, we're front runners."

I just want to point out that you have a couple typos in the chap, and that I don't think Ron has ever been skinny. He eats like an army, and he has been playing Quidditch regularly with his brothers at the very least so he might not have been huge back in school but he definitely wasn't skinny, I don't think at least.
 

paulmoss
Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 01/07/09
Once again a great story. Well written, I could almost feel what the characters were feeling. Keep up the good work
 

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