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poor Harry, can't there be any way to save him? There must be a way! But then again, everything's messed up with the deaths of Ginny and Molly... great chapter! |
Author Feedback: ah well I'm afraid you'll just have to wait and see as far as that question is concerned, but i will admit that you make a VERY vital point about the murders...
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/09/08
What you are writing here, is just breaking my heart. The love harry has for hermione,him saying she calms him when he is thinking about her, the feel of her skin, how he can't be without her, you can really feel his emotions, like your harry talking great job.
I don't know how you are going to get them together again.
First he is turning into voldy? by way of saying his soul is being taken over by him. importantly how is he going to get voldy out of his soul?
and secondly, what about the murder's of molly and ginny. he will eventually have to deal with them. he will definitly be sent to askaban!. unless they just run away, and never look back!
I will be waiting to read this really exciting story,and about how these questions will be answered.  |
Author Feedback: oh thank you so much, and here i was afraid i made him come off as a whiny little boy, lol. as for how they are going to get together, I'm so happy to see no one has a clue how i plan on doing that, really just makes it all the more fun in my opinion!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/09/08
It's like you reach inside my chest, take hold of my heart, and squeeeeeeeeeeeze. This was painfully beautiful. Update again soon. |
Author Feedback: oh  thank you, you truly are much too mind, and i will be sure to update asap. as of late I've just been extremely busy but in a month or so after i finish this huge project I'm working on I'll be sure to have more time to update frequently--or at least MORE often. |
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I really love how you write Harry!
Especially: "so much so that I actually fell out of my seat in my fit of shock and was left with a rather unpleasant and oddly shaped bruise on my arse."
The scarism/angst is brilliant!
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Author Feedback: well i figure when you're thinking it's not totally linear, or at least mine aren't... so a thought like that tends to pop in despite the unorthodoxy of it b/c of association, lol
thank you so much for reviewing
cosmo
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GiringiroSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/09/08
Not much to say here, I understand the fic's point, bleak as it is.
I'm unsure about Hermione running away the day of her marriage. That's an impulsive, thoughtless decision, which does seem off. If she believed Ron deserved better, I think she would have rejected him when he asked her hand, or when she had second thoughts after accepting. Now she's probably trying to rationalize things after the fact... But it's still off that she ran like that.
Is this fic going to be overly long? I ask because Hermione getting over Harry in favor of Ron was the one obstacle I saw, and that's gone, by now the characters are more or less ready to start crypt-keeping... I mean, I don't see more twists coming. Am I wrong?
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Author Feedback: i understand where that perception may come in, but personally i think that there's a difference between planning from it and actually arriving at the day... realizing that it's OFFICIAL, that you're actually going to be giving up on him, on your love.
as for the length of the piece, no, it'll be one of reasonable length, probably only 4-5 chapters really, i don't think that the fic really needs any more twists than all of the preexisting ones, right? |
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That was cruel... poor Ron... how on earth are you going to make it all better? no golden trio in this story I guess hehe... I hope they can somehow take Voldemort's soul out of him, can they?? |
Author Feedback: no, I'm afraid I'm taking a different route from my usual with this piece... too tru3e, about the Ron note, though. |
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This is so sad! Can't Hermione do anything for him? omg... to the next chapter! |
Author Feedback: well that question waits to be answered, but so far, no. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/09/08
Well, so far I'm pretty depressed. There seems to be an influx of angst in fandom lately. But I guess you can't expect sunshine and giggles with a title like "Crypt Keeper".
Keep going. Your writing is excellent as usual, and I want to see what happens. I just need to read something really cheerful between now and your next update. |
Author Feedback: in my defense the other HHr fic i have up is a rather happy one, despite, you know, the murder aspect to it... but that's beside the point, lol. as for the angst though, you made an astute note when you mentioned that it IS called crypt keeper of all things...
onto the latter note, you truly are much too kind! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/09/08
I'm absolutly loving this so far. I can't wait to read how your going to exsplain the murder's. and mostly how he will rid voldermort's demoned soul from his body. And if he can? |
Author Feedback: oh thank you so much! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/09/08
Not sure what to make of it. You have written it well and the route it is taking is quite believable. The only confusion I had was Harry's statement about changing (changing what exactly?), and his new found determination to have a relationship with Hermione after he was the one who dumped her. |
Author Feedback: the way i look at it is that he's realized that despite how much he may want to protect her from himself in the end they always find each other regardless of how hard they may try to avoid it, it's inevitable in his eyes. she's his saving grace, and he's come to realize that despite prior assumptions, he just cant live without that anymore. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/09/08
It seems weidish that Harry wants to get back together when he's the one who left her at the alter. It'd help if you explain that more. But overall a really great fic and I can't wait for more! |
Author Feedback: it's like he said, he thought he could make it without he,r for her sake, to protect her, but despite everything it's always her in the end, he needs her and he's tired of fighting that. |
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I like it much better as a chapter story than just a one-shot that leaves Hermione with Ron and Harry as a condemned bad guy--probably 'cause I'm one of those people who likes to think anyone can be redeemed. Maybe you could expand a little on the circumstances surrounding Molly and Ginny's deaths, though? |
Author Feedback: lol, i assume some people would, personally, though i think that both work. on other sites i have buried and crypt keeper up as two separate stories actually since i enjoy both perceptions of the concept.
as for ginny and molly more will come on that, it's not somethign i can totally leave out, but i must warn you that the logic may not make as much sense through the eyes of a rational person rather than one with two conflicting persona's in his body... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/09/08
I am so happy you are going to continue with this story! this was to good to just leave it were you left off. This will be interestiing how harry get's voldemort out of his soul? if he does? and what becomes of harry and hermiones love for each other. It broke my heart that he left her at the alter, and then to have her with ron, talk about a shaddered heart, for both of them, because you can plainly tell they just absolutly are still inlove with each other.I really don't know how you will pull this off,but it will be interesting to find out!. will be waiting to read on. |
Author Feedback: vital questions there, most of which won't be answered till the very end, I'm afraid, but i look forward to getting there, at least. as for ron, well sometimes you just need comfort, it may not be with who you want to be but you need it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/09/08
so sad  ...but its great that you're expanding this story. i read buried and thought it was great!!!! this is awesome too and i liked how you added in some harmony. keep it up  and up date soon!! |
Author Feedback: i'm glad to hear that you thought so, thank you! |
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