that was so sweet and sad a t the same time, beautiful you did a great job!

ugh. this killed me a little bit. it was pretty good. and the Hermione Potter, the kiss, and i could see them runnng/walking to each other. thank u.

Wow great story, I especially loved when Hermione said to Neville actually it's Potter, Hermione Potter. I would love to see Molly's reaction to that maybe a day after the end of the war.

How sad, but in reality very true. I can't believe you killed off Ron! A very moving piece.

Aww, that was so cute! I loved it! I liked the ending. Poor Molly though...

I like the story, I assume there are multiple trios of columns scattered around? It's a really good idea that I don't think I've ever seen before
Keep up the good work, I think I'm going to raid your profile for another fic

That is a very interesting and very cool chapter. Are you going to make this into a full story or is it only going to be a few chapters long?

So sad.. and beautiful at the same time..
I always say that I wouldn't have cared if Ron had died in canon, that I would be glad, but everytime I read a fic when it happens I get sad, I think is because in the fics HHr are together, meanwhile in canon, if Ron dies there's a bigger possibility of them getting together.. hehehe..
Anyway, good job.

OMG i love it , but why kill Ron ? i would have liked it if you mentioned Draco , but that's just my opinion , i love the fic anyway , keep writing

julisteamer

An interesting concept - I've seen a lot of post-battle fics, but this idea really helps capture the pain of the consequences of war. Good job on this one.

Beautifully written. I loved how you showed little snapshots of what was happening around them, the interactions of the different characters and their emotions. I teared up when reading the part about Luna and Ron and her kissing him for the last time.

So beautiful. Well done.

A very moving story, made up of very small moments that collect together to make up a whole much greater than the parts. Luna and Ron, Neville reminding Hermione to list herself, Molly finding Ginny, all were very much a part of the whole.

Very well written, thank you.

Wow, it's seems like its been forever since we've heard from you, so I'm very glad to see you with another story, which I didn't even have time to full read as I must go to work, but I've been so horrible at reviewing lately, I thought I better say at least something. So great job as always, from what I read so far, hopefully I can finish it soon and we'll see more of you!
Thanks, and cheers

Nicely done one-shot...though I'd love to see the details of what happened before AND after!

dennisud