I have walked around the Sydney Opera House and ridden the harbour taxis. I have felt the ancient awe and deep stillness of Uluru and my nose has prickled at the hot red dust and the sharp tree sap smell in the air. So many mysteries, so much unexplained beauty, so much magic! Thank you for helping me walk in those places again, though I am now halfway around the globe.

A very satisfying tale. It got a little weird once in awhile with the veil, but hey, I liked the ending and you spun the story well.

Ah! Now this is very good! Most stories I've read about the Grangers in Oz are okay, but this one rises above those.

Well, I must say that it's a nice start. I'll have to read the rest of the story to form a proper opinion, but it does have promise.

This story was original and beautifully told. A wonderful use of culture weaved into the story and I couldn't stop until I had completed it. I hope you write more stories.

Well this is definitely original. I love how you narrate it. Brilliant!!! Not many author writing about different culture in different countries even those who come from other than Europe or the states. Harmony fanfic writers and readers come from many parts of the world but Harry is stuck in England or Usa.

will you write more about different culture? Maybe japan or Mongolia? Just a suggestion. It will definitely be original.

what a great story this was, thank you for writing it and i hope that you write another story soon, i would definitely look forward to reading it.

Nicely done. Very unique plot, and excellent characterization. Thanks for a fun read!

Great chapter. I like the way you used flashbacks from the books and the narrative is really good

Interesting chapter, it caught me right from the beginning, hope it gets better

I enjoyed your story and the inter-weaving of aboriginal themes. Are they based on real aboriginal folklore or was everything original? Either way, good work.

er just wondering.. but since when do we aussies called ranga's blue?

I thought that the whole story was fantastic - you really described Harry & Hermione's journey with such great detail - as with other Harmonians, all their scenes were a joy to read. Good luck with your next story!

Yep its a ten! I'm not a big fan of epilogues but what the heck, you know. Outstanding short story that hits both romance and mystery targets. Love the wrap up and it was a good place to end the story. Keep writing!

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I have enjoyed your story very much. I appreciate the research that went into your construction of the Aborigine mythology. Your adaptation to the world of Harry Potter is brillant. Well done.

It is a pleasure to read a such a well crafted story. Very few typos and grammatical errors. Nicely drawn characters. I will be reading this again and that is the hightest praise I can give.