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Wonderings of a Wife-to-Be

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muggledad
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/09/08
Well done! You captured a lot of what I felt (and I assume my wife felt) prior to our wedding. I am a hopeless romantic and I really like your writing style. Keep it coming!
 

CryptoSquirrel
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/08/08
shoot, sorry, I was trying to add this to my favorites and my computer messed up. sorry...
 

margie19142
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/08/08
Great start! I can't wait to read more of your story. I hope the next chapter is posted soon. You do know that you are mean, don't you? Ending the chapter there and leaving us hanging ... that is NOT nice! Please post more on this story soon!
 

Ashlie
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/08/08
aww...don't u dare leave it at dat!!..
please continue wid it.. its nice and warm...kinda liked the air about it...
nice job... hopin you will continue wid it...
luv!
 

apaidan
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/08
An excellent glimpse into such a private moment. You capture her, and through the letter Harry, as they both start to over think things before the wedding. Thanks for sharing a very good story with the rest of us
 

mow09
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/08
aww...that was a very nice chapter. and if i am correct the story isn't complete yet so, is there more to come? i surely hope so i wish to read more. see you when you update your story
 

Mike
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/08
Sniff, sniff! What a really touching little one shot. Thanks. You write quite well.
 

husker_fan_2006
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/08
Aww this was really great!! I loved it! It was a really sweet story, keep up the good work in your writings!!
 

SALETH
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/08
I like a lot the way you see Hermione here, her insecurities like everybody else. And the fact that Harry's words are what calm her in the end is a nice fact too. Just hope there is a second chapter about Harry's insecurities.
 

Nimbus02
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/08
Hmm...interesting story...the only thing i'm concerned with is the grammer...it's a little confusing...not hyping you down but it's written like in the present tense then the past...got to stick to one type...lol...but I'll still read! Happy Writing!
 

Dream1
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/08
Nice one shot. I like that they are both unsure but are still willing to take that step towards the unknown - together.
 

kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/08
cute story!love it alot! cant wait to read more of your stories!
 

Looney Warner Mouse.
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/08
What a lovely chapter to read.
it warms my heart to read some thing like this.
I am hope to read about the wedding soon in the chapter. please continue this wonderful & excellent story.
this none stop fun.
Harry and Hermione Potter sound so good to me.
But till then so long.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!
Looney Warner Mouse " Good night and good luck!"
 

Devil of the Lake666
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/08
this is super cute. i really loved the ending, and i like that you made it comewhat realistic and true to the characters of harry and hermione. hermione is somewhat of a worrywart so it wasn't so hard to believe that she would be worrying about her marriage. all in all, i really liked this one-shot
 

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