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Is this the last chapter of To Stand Against The Darkness?
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Author Feedback: Nope, just got to exorcise the demon that is Hippogriff, my other story. Stand is just on the back burner for now, but will be finished. Thanks for asking
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yay!!!! Great update! Please give another. Your loyal fans beseech you not to leave us in suspense for too long. I would like to say that I find incredible enjoyment in your work as a writer. Please keep up the great work. |
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KilcanonSigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 24/12/08
Great story. The only thing I would like to see is a Chapter on what is happening with Harry and Hermione's old friends. |
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A very complex and thoughtful chapter. It's a good job and solid, if a bit frustrating for the lack of (apparent) forward progress. It will be good to see things really begin to role and for the 'sides' start to really take shape. The scrambling of the two sides to decide 'who's who' is interesting...but only up to a point.
I look forward to your next chapter!
Regards,
the_scribbler
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MikeSigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 15/12/08
Whew! All this politics is facsinating, the binding oaths, the wheels and machinations. It can all get a bit heady. It's an altogether different kind of battle. I am happy for Sirius, he deserves much happiness. I do see dark clouds on the horizon. I do hope that Umbridge gets swatted soon. I really don't like her. Great job!
BTW, I picked up Loreena McKennitt new Christmas album, sounds great! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review and the recommendation. I'd forgotten that Loreena was releasing a Christmas Album, I'll have to pick it up.
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Excellent, as always.
This is moving into an area I love - political infighting, so I am even more keen to read on than I was before! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review, I'll see you next time
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Hello Muggledad.
A very interesting update.
It is good to hear that Sirius is going to be a daddy. Any thoughts on when that will happen to Harry?
Their will be massive fallout in the Wizengamot when the Queen enacts one of Hermione's suggestions.
It was a nice touch to have Sirius forget all about Draco and his mother. A kidnapping attempt at Christmas could be on the cards with Draco as one of the main agents or maybe not.
Regards
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PS any thoughts on C10 I forwarded to you? |
Author Feedback: Hey amigo,
Yeah, there will be quite a bit of fallout. As far as the Malfoys go *says in a sing song voice * "I'm not telling"
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ScoutSigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 14/12/08
My hat is off to you, muggledad. It's nothing short of amazing the thought and detail and research you put into this story. Just amazing.
As to your a/n #5, I was sure it was Harry when I read that thought of Hermione's.
Well I'm off to read "All because of a Hippogriff" now. I'm positive that will also be amazing.
Take care.
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Author Feedback: Thank you for the kind review Jean Louise. Glad you didn't need to be told, I'm sure many others did. I thought it was kind of obvious. "With anvil sized hints" and all.
Hope you enjoy Hippogriff.
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HJPSigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 14/12/08
Great chap. I liked it very much. Please update soon.
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the review, keep coming back
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another very good chapter, i believe i will be taking a minute to view your new fic and see what else your keyboard can create. keep up the wonderful work. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review and for reading "Hippogriff'. See you next time
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Great chapter! I love the interaction between Harry and Hermione. It clearly shows the love that started out as friendship and has turned into true love. I'm glad that loser Ron got what's coming to him. Keep it up! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review, keep coming back
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That went MUCH too smoothly for my taste, also much too fast to be very interesting.
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the review, it was intentionally rushed as most all readers knew the material except for some changes. There's quite a bit more after 1, hope you stick around.
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TiredEyesSigned | Chapter : 19 | Date : 02/12/08
Suprime *_* I read it all between yesterday and today... It's amazing and i totally want more! Even thought I wish Ron hadn't act like such a prat... He is a prat, mind you, but still... |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much for your review. You did some serious reading to get it all in two days!  Thanks for the complement. As far as Ron goes, it's how I see his character, he's very immature and, as they say, 'the truth will out.' See you next time
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i am salavating for more, this battle was so well written. I can't wait for the next update, when i wasn't busy spending time with my fiance i was at my computer reading straght from chapter 1 to now. I love getting wrapped up in a great story and appreciate your work giving me the chance to do that this weekend. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the very kind review. It might be a two week interval until ch 20, but I'll try and update faster. We'll see. I'm glad you are enjoying reading 'stand', hopefully as much as I am enjoying writing it.
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Great chapter! An all around great way to start out the story. I like how you had Harry do a "last ditch effort" to get out of their and really did everything he could with what spells he knew to get out of there. It's more realistic and exciting. I also love how you showed the relationship between Harry and Hermione while making Ron look like the loser that he is. The way Harry dealt with everything was key and evident and it showed poise under pressure on Harry's part. The way Harry got Sirius free from his charges was great as well. Keep it up! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review, keep reading, there's about 155 thousand more words after ch 1! See you next time
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