Good, I suppose. Can you pretty please, just for me, speed up the harry-Hermione love? Hermione has it, Harry, well, he needs some work.

Angela

I like the whole thing with Harry\'s thoughts. But why can\'t he like her BACK!?!? But other than that, fantastic work! Keep it up!

Your faithful reader,
Angela

aaaahhhh....it stopped.....and i was happily reading and it stop....
....how ironic.......
PLZ PLZ PLZ continue.........
....waiting here.......

oOoOoOohhhh........
i get it....
i hope though that harry will FINALLY see who the hell is the girl he's been desperately finding for.......
....although i know who it is already....
...newei great story....

AAAAhhhh......eeeeeppp.....hehehehehe
okie i know this is NOT a normal review but i cant help myself....
plz continue!!!!

this seems nice i think i may read some more later on don't doubt yourself if you like a story then no one can tell you any different its you mind its your liking stay that way you shouldn't let other drag you down keep writng

I think you did a fabulous job. It was short, simple, sweet. You should totally develop it into a full length story. I love anything full length, except my english essay I'm supposed to be writing. That's a different story. Great job. Keep Writing!

I loved it. Short, simple, sweet. I think you should totally develop this into a full length story. I love everything full length, except for the essay I'm supposed to be writing, but that's a totally different story. Great work. Keep Writing!

this is so sweet and cute and sad and depressing and oh.. I run out of words here, help me out.

why haven't you updated it? it's so good story and I would be more than glad to read more about this fiction. read and find out how things will go between them..

Very good story!, keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter!

You should never write again! Stop making pitiful excuses"oh I have writer's block" Read Harry Potter and the Mysteries of Love, then you will have a good idea of what real writing is!

awwww! that was so cute! you have to keep writing and tell us how it ends up. I am so curious. i obviously want harry and hermione to get together, but will harry ever figure out that the person he has feelings for is hermione??? Will hermione ever summon the courage to tell him how she feels??? i hope both happen. I don't know what i'll do if they don't end up together. i'll... go INSANE!!! ANYWAY... good work- keep it up and .... HURRY!!!!!!!!!

awwww! that was so cute! you have to keep writing and tell us how it ends up. I am so curious. i obviously want harry and hermione to get together, but will harry ever figure out that the person he has feelings for is hermione??? Will hermione ever summon the courage to tell him how she feels??? i hope both happen. I don't know what i'll do if they don't end up together. i'll... go INSANE!!! ANYWAY... good work- keep it up and .... HURRY!!!!!!!!!

Oh my gosh!!! I love this story! It is sooooo good! Write more, and quickly. I can't wait until they get together at the end. (They always do)!

thank you so much for the story. this is almost exactly the way I imagined things going with harry and hermione since i read the first book. pleeeeeease hurry and write more. thanks.