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The Love I Wish I Had

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SILVERArroWGRIFFIN
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/08
that was nice and cute. it's really nice....please write more
 

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muggledad
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/08/08
This is really good. Thanks for the almost poetic reconunting of their love story. Your post-HW account is very believable and romantic (I'm a romantic, my wife gives me grief about it). Thanks very much and I hope you write more, it's very good.
 

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sakura_txell
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/08
It was very beautiful... I love it when stories are written from a kid's eyes. They are very insightful.
Congratulations for this shot!
 

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husker_fan_2006
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/08
Aww, great job, wonderful story!! If only JK Rowling could see what clearly should've been!! Keep up the good work in your writing!!
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/08/08
That was very sweet, and I appreciated the realism of it. I've read other stories where Harry and Hermione are married and they practically shag in front of their kids, and the children don't even blink about it. Sorry, but that screams "author who doesn't have children" to me. OMG! MY BURNING EYES! NO CHILD WANTS TO SEE THAT! They do, however, want to see that they're parents love each other and that they're in love with each other the way Audrey does in this. It makes me feel all warm and happy inside.

Oh, and I love the name Edmund!
 

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Barmy_old_Codger
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/08/08
Wonderful little piece from a third person perspective. I can't help but question where the name Edmund came from.
Thanks
Barmy
 

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