The story is very interesting and I really liked the first chapter.Its a HR/H story with a difference and I'm looking forward to see who was spying them!!

this start is really good. i like it a lot. please continue and update really soon! great job btw

OMG you must update I like it already. If there is anything ican suggest, it is to maek the chapters longer (but since this is a prolouge, I can understand shortness.)

I'm curious to see where you take this! I will eagerly be awaiting the next chapter.

ooooooooooooooooh Hermiones in trouble!lol. Great job! i cant wait to read the rest of this story! it sounds like its going to be a really good one! keep up the excellent work on it!

sounds good so far.....i wonder who's watching them?? update soon plz

well im thinking its harry thats watching them. its his assignment to watch vicky, and it just so happens he asks hermione out. well thats what i think anyways. i hope there isnt too much drama in this one. i wouldve thought that ginny wasnt the girl he would be dating. maybe some stranger he met? i really dont like ginny or krum. hated that he was the one that took hermione to the ball. and dont get me started on ron....he was just jealous that he went with his idol. well keep it up..how long is this gonna be anyway. i like it great start.

hmm... i like the premise, quite a bit actually, in fact i think that the best definition for something like this would be along the lines of "an oldie but a goodie" lol

anyway, onto the rest of the review, i'd probably just recommend you be careful with pace, your prose is good, and has the makings of a great author, but you go through things so quickly that it doesnt give you as much room to show off that talent also beware of the parenthesis, they're technically not supposed to be used in writing--fiction at least.

lookign foreward to more!
cosmo

p.s. be careful with bolding the ENTIRE chapter