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I just wanted to add this to my favorite stories list. |
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alruneSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 22/08/08
very interesting story... i'm always a fan of the alternate universe stories, and this one definitely does not disappoint. keep up the great work and i can't wait to read the next chapter. please update soon! rock out! -aj- |
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It felt like u stopped in between a chapter.....oh well atleast there ws no misunderstanding between Harry and Hermione.... |
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This chapter did not disappoint! However, the editing could have been better. Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next one. Till then. |
Author Feedback: Apologies for the editing. it was rather rushed.... i thunk i will remove it and re post it when i have checked it through  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 13/08/08
Very good I'm glad hermione wasn't all crazy jealous or anything but the last paragraph didn't make any sense |
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i'm not sure the word superintendent is the right word for malfoy, maybe supervisor?
i liked this chapter and that it wasn't all angsty and that they were smart enough to figure it out.. |
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I'm glad that everything is working out ok. No drama yet for Hermione and Harry. I wonder if Hermione should flirt with Draco to get the information of the dark artifacts. Great chapter of the dinner. I got me laughing a little. Keep Writing. |
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wow... what a way for harry and hermione to meet... i really like this story... i usually review every chapter but i was so hooked i couldn't stop to review... but later today (since i got home from work and started reading and need to sleep) i will reread the chapters and review... i will also leave an in depth review for this chapter... just wanted to let you know that i love the story so far and cant wait to read more... |
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WHAT A CLIFFY!!!! MORE MORE MORE I LOVE THIS STORY AND I ALMOST SPIT OUT MY DRINK WHEN RON ASKED DID YOU FALL IN!!! FUNNY STUFF KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
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Great story so far. I'm really enjoying it. It's cute, but got the right amount of sexual tension to balance out the sweet factor. I'm also really impressed with your ability to update so quickly. Is it prewritten or something? Regardless, I'm thrown off today since you have not posted yet. Well, anyway, can't wait for the update to come, even if that means waiting a *gasp* whole day! Till then. |
Author Feedback: the first 4 chapters were pre written as my Authors application to PK, but i shelved it thinking it was not good enough for this outstanding site
however this is a firm fave of my fics and it has resurfaced , and yes i write everyday, children pending.. it is 8:51a.m here and i am draughting u the next chapter just for you Mmbug98841...
My daughter has a *Fairy princess* party today, so i will not update till later tonight...so i am busy writing now... there is no long left of this ficlet but i have many more to come... thank you for reading and enjoying my journey with me
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i love it, although harry's job with draco is still confusing and i'm not sure if draco knows harry's an auror or not.
also, why are they in the magical world, but you never see them using magic? |
Author Feedback: Ok...Draco is Harry's superinendant Auror at the ministry yes? but the minister for magic himself has requested Harry take an advanced course, only select to a few Aurors, to help investigate a dark artifacts ring, which is working in London.( but Draco so not to blow everything, was asked to *Run* this op, & knowing he was somehow involved, they could try and lift the lid on it) now Harry was he perfect choice but Draco knew what Harry had to do years ago,. date women for money because of what his own dad did to the Potters... are u with me so far? The next chapter will see Draco sneaking as low as he can get between Harry & Hermione....  By using Harry but don't worry. i'm a H/HR shipper till the end....as for the magic? i like it to be quite subtle. i love magical stories but sometimes i think they do magic for the sake of it... i thought it would make it more reasl if ym charatcers were VERY AU and magic was kept to a lmit in my fic.... |
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IM TOTALLY IN LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I LIKE NO VOLDIE MOLDIE JUST PURE AND JOY LOVE BETWEEN OUT TWO FAV PEOPLE |
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weirderSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 12/08/08
Aw, I can't wait for your next update. And, I hope we get to see the night of 'cutting scissors' soon |
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weirderSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 12/08/08
Haha, that's so funny, he cleaned up for her, when he changed his shirt to sleep in got me laughing. I can't wait to get to the next one! |
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That's sad that Hermione's plan is going to be messed up. I mean now with Draco being a pain in the butt. I wonder how Hermione will take the news. I hope she does hear her voice mail before she goes to the musical and not be stood up. That will suck major and Hermione's self esteem will be very low. Keep Writing. |
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