ok i was expecting something longer. that was way too short. i like this but that was just like reading a paragraph. still like it though. wonder what will happen now.

omg!i hope hermione is alright! love the stroy! its turning out really good!cant wait to read the rest of it!keep up the excellent work on it! absolutley one of my favorites!

Gah! Bad, author! Bad! Leaving us to worry like that!

Pleeeaaase update soon!

The title makes me worried, but we are at PortKey and they are always to end up together. I am really hoping you aren't going to kill both of them....since Lily sent Harry back. I will continue to read to see what happens.

that was a waste of chapter. how many words was that 100?

Well, that was one REALLY short chapter, but it was good, ha. Hope you continue soon

Oh my.....I hope that both of them will be alright....update soon.

~Harmony_4ever88

Really kind of choppy and rushed. But I want to see what happens.

oh wow!. I can't beleive they where in a car cracsh. I can't wait to see what happens next. I have a feeling that something big is going to happen because this story is labeled angst. I still want to know what will hapeen. Update soon.

omg i hope hermione is ok! greatjob! i cant wait to read the rest of it! it's really good so far and i cant wait to read the rest of it! keep up the excellent work on it!

If you kill Hermione, I'd be very upset... Harry is supposed to live WITH Hermione not without her. Great chapter, I would like to read more.

So please continue soon.

Oh my.....I hope Harry's alright. I like it already. Update soon!

~Harmony_4ever88

Really good! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

great job!i like this storyso far!keep up the excellent work on it!