nice one! this story is awesome! keep up the absolutely excellent work and update soon!  |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 10/11/08
That was amazing! Poor Ron, getting attacked by his best friends! I laughed a lot! I cant wait to read more! Please update again soon! |
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anaritaSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 10/11/08
Great chapter! I really like this story, I'm looking forward to know what happens next so please update soon...
(By the way, you wrote Seamus Finnegam right the first time, but all those other times you spelled it Shamus!) |
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OMG!!! Why does Ron have to be a prick and Ginny has to be a major pain in the butt to other people's relationships. Please tell me that Harry and Hermione end up together and get rid of the Weasely's relations as soon as possible. Cause they are such a headache. I can't wait for your next update. Keep Writing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 09/11/08
repeat after me his name is Seamus not Shamus, Seamus, not Shamus, SEAMUS |
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hmm... one thing I would like to point out is that you went from spelling seamus's name correctly to, well... not spelling it correctly.
I'm quite amazed that molly knew that someone was trying to accio ginny, as opposed to some other random thing happening or a different summoning spell being used or... something.
I got the basic gist of what happened between harry and hermione in the library but everything seemed slightly... jumbled. ah, such is the life with drama (lol?)
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 09/11/08
I do like this chapter, so dramatic. Also, your narration and description were so vivid that I could feel what THEY felt.
Please update ASAP.
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Hi! OMG everything is such a mess. I really hope Harry can get Hermione to understand that he loves her and some stupid potion is not making him do it. Please update again with some more happiness. Until then, Byes  |
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this the saded story that I ever read.
Poor Harry,poorHermione,Poor Ron I am going to cry all night becouse of this story.  Ginny you evil  why wolud she do some kine of thing like this.
I gave this story 5  please continue it.
I am looking forword to the next wonderful & excellent story.
But till then have a real good week and weekend.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!
Looney Warner Mouse " Good night and Good luck!" |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/11/08
Very compelling and well written.
It's going to be very interesting to see what will actually convince Hermione that it's really Harry and not the potion.
Looking forward to the continuation of this. Thank you for posting an excellent story. |
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Please! Someone slap Hermione NOW!! Every logical faculty seems to have disintegrated, her mind has turned into lukewarm oatmeal and she's lost AT LEAST 100 I.Q points in less than 24 hours!
Harry has turned, emotionally speaking, into Ron and needs a severe smacking too.
I mean, all that is required is a visit to Madam Pomphrey and a quick check for potions - and maybe a course of anti-psychotics while they're there. |
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Oh, so sad! Poor Hermione... And Harry.
Loi, I loved the fork part. |
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and... ginny needs to learn to use her brain. not only did she say she did something illegal, but she also told a couple of the biggest gossips in school.
so, were she and harry actually dating or is she just after him? it was kinda implied while she was talking to lavender and parvati before leaving for paris that she and harry were dating. I think?
all the time harry kept trying to run up the stairs I kept thinking to myself "go out and get your broom, or at least accio the stupid thing!" lol but instead of course he would go and accio ginny. I'm quite surprised that he didn't actually get her LOL
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Ginny is so screwed and deservingly too. But I love this fic! I haven't see a fic so well-written before. |
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that last idea harry had to climb the staircase...I've been wondering why no boy has ever tried it before...now we know why. |
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