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thelimarckist
Unsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 07/01/09
Good hot chapter, but are you going to continue this into Hogwarts?
 

Natasha
Unsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 06/01/09
Okay so I started reading this fic as you called it yesterday night and was playing catch up. I really like how everything came together though and the progressiveness of the fic. I hope you post the next chapter soon this is great. Big ups to you and your Betas happy writing.
 

choccy2604
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/01/09
good story! i look forward to seeing what harry and hermione get up to in their private dorms...


 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/01/09
Very nicely done Lillian! College was a long time ago for me but the wanton way that you write this story has jogged my memories. Bless you my child. lol I don't believe Rosie if she thinks that you seem desperate, I think that you will find a person who likes this web site as much as I do and share with him. If he can read your writing and not jump your bones, then he's gay. lol
N.O.C.
 

Mai_Dreizehn
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/01/09
gosh, so many sex moments in one chapter!
thank you so much! what a way to start my new year!
 

Mrs. Radcliffe
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/01/09
Harry grinned at her. “Have some more `heady' fun?”

“Oh, you're never going to let that go!” she cried.

He laughed and held her close to him and Hermione closed her eyes. She loved being in his arms like this; she felt so safe and protected. Suddenly they were on a bed, Harry's bed, and his lips were on hers, gentle and loving, and Hermione remembered another way she loved being in Harry's arms.

*~*~* I would never let anyone forget it anyways..LOL!

People should always be careful around what they say to their boyfriends seriously they will never forget it and i love that about them but it can suck when tit's you. lol..
wow they really have like hormones that are unnatural. glad that they can now control it lol! *note sarcasm* Anyways glad you wrote she won;t get pregnant yet which is so cliche.

UPDATE SOON! Happy 2009!
 

Darth Koonstyle
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/01/09
Delightful, as always.

Ever since I joined Portkey, I have followed your writings. Excellent form, description, and all.

Happy New Year. ^.^
Author Feedback: aww! thank you! that's always lovely to hear!

Thank you for reading and reviewing
--Amanda
 

Pepperoni
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 05/01/09
Nicely done. Smooth talking and a well balanced sluffiness level. Keep up the great work.
 

Pepperoni
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/01/09
Interested story and I look forward to the rest. Keep up the great work. Yours, Pepperoni
 

NicholePotter86
Unsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 04/01/09
HI yeah! I understand about life getting in the way dear so dont worry about the late update It was great anyways. I love Harry and Hermione as the horny teenagers I always imagine them to be. Please update again as soon as you get the time. Until then, Happy New Years
 

Silver Dragon
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 04/01/09
Great chapter, though I had to go back and reread chapter 9 to remind myself what was going on, lol. I couldn't help laughing when they went and saw Wall-E, I loved that movie and it is now out on DVD. I can't help but wonder what will be next.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
i\'m welling up maann this is soo perfect waiting on pins and needles for more.
 

whatareyouevensaying
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 04/01/09
I'm actually really excited to see Wall-E, but as I'm sure you know, you had to advance canon over ten years forward to make it available. Always unfortunate.

Still, this update was excellent. As long as you keep the recent references down and keep the focus on the characters (something I'm sure you'd do without this pushy review), then I know that this story will continue to be very good.

Looking forward to more.
 

Grumpy-Numero-Uno
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 04/01/09
great chapter. harry and hermione are having way too much fun while her parents are out of town. i wonder how hermione is going to point out to harry that they will be sharing a dorm when they get back to hogwarts.

can't wait to read more...

candice
 

MyUsedRomance
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 04/01/09
hahah. fantastic.
and wall-e was already released on dvd. i also loved it and had the same perspectives. i went to see it with my sister and cousin. i think we were the only [near] adults there. lol.
thank you!
 

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