THAT WAS SOOOOO CUTE!

I love the stories that are like this - you should write more.

Very very good, I loved it. Short, but sweet and fluffy, just how I like it!

that was so sweet....i absolutely loved it...awwwww...

awesome job... keep it up...

this was such a sweet L/J story!!! it made me laugh as well. i always get so happy when i read about lily and james together (same thing goes for h/hr)

I liked how James helped Lily get to their class in time. How Marauder-like of him to know shortcuts like that. It's a good way of showing how James changed from a "berk" (as Sirius described themselves) to someone Lily could fall in love with.

A weird  character showed up many times in this upload though. Distracting.

There were plenty of missing commas though. Generally, you put a comma at points where you'd pause. In direct quotes, you generally put a comma before the name of the person being addressed. "And how about you, Remus?" "And what do you mean by that, James?"

its alright, could have been written better, seems like it was rushed? i love your work, such as the PG rivalry, and loving him, losing her, and never interview HP... does this mean you're going to update those soon?