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oh my god... it's such a sad story. i actually had goosebumps. It was still a really nice story! i love it
you have an interesting mind to come up with a story like this.
keep it up
-megz- |
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Bit disturbing to be honest, more darkish then angst I would say. But great twist and well written overall, good read~ |
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liamtohaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/11/08
That was pretty depressing. Really sad. Poor hermione, my heart was breaking for her and ron too for seeing her like that. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/08
Omg! i so wasnt expecting that ending. Briliant Fic. Made me cry. |
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heahruneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/08
Oh wow... Angstiness. I felt shocked when I realised the end... Of course, the hints were there, but I thought that it was perhaps Harry who was crazy/dead (which he was... Dead, at least). But I never thought Hermione was a loon!
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That really was unexpected, wasn't it? I mean, when Hermione said he was sleeping ... That brought a couple of tears to my eyes. |
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OMG! i didn't really realised that Harry was dead in this story.
wow. this story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!
i actually love it.It's really original and unique. I could never thought of an idea like this.
i hope you'll write more  |
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I cried. I don't cry often, but this made me bawl! At first I thought Harry had a terminal illness or something, but...
Beautifully written, though. |
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Ooh, angsty. Poor Hermione, thinking Harry's still alive. She's turned into the next Ariana Dumbledore.
But it's a very well written story, and a good idea too! Awesome work.
Keep it up!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/08
oh my... I just burst out crying at the time Ron said \"sleep tight, mate,\"...  wow.... this is such a powerful story. I still have goosebumps! It was creepy, sad, pitying (for hermione), and bittersweet at the same time... aww... may not be your average fluff stuff but I love it! |
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ahhhhh  Oh my goodness... That was so sad... and so sweet... and... oh my goodness! My only critique is that "upmost" is not a word, "utmost" is. Everything else...ahhhhhhhhh. *trails off into sputtering*  what a sweet story... Well done! |
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oh my... i am stunned into speechlessness... poor hermione... poor ron... that has to be so hard on him seeing her like that and not being able to do anything about it...
candice |
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i had a feeling he wasn't sleeping in the sense hermione was talking about. one of those haunting feelings, you know ?
your fic really spoke to me. you had ron and hermione in character perfectly- even though i've never seen an insane hermione.
i liked reading this. keep up the good work (: |
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NicoleUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/08
That was so sweet, and heartbreaking. I teared up a bit there at the end. |
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